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Until Sunset

The dawn doth come too soon my love Once more we must be apart And I shall wait all day for you To return, and warm my heart Your beauty beyond comprehension Seems to glow from within I sit in hushed contemplation And wait for the night to begin So at last you come back to me Pulling my soul as the tide It's clear as the freshly washed shingle Our love, cannot be denied Then as the night grows old, once more And draws near, that moment of strife When it's time for you to leave me again Sweet Luna, the love of my life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/30/2010 3:32:00 PM
Looking for writers for my new contest on verse with dialect from the Isles, love to have a real Brit take part...show them how to do it? Please enter. Light & Love (Sista's Bloody Sista's..is the contest title)
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Date: 9/29/2010 3:45:00 AM
This is my style of poem, Excellent write my friend, makes me want to read more! Gordon, (hicky)
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Date: 9/24/2010 10:35:00 AM
I truly enjoyed this one Nick! I just adore poems about the Sun and Moon, ah those lovers---this sure is sweet and romantic, got me smiling :) -- wish you the best if this is for the contest :)-- nikko :)
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Date: 9/20/2010 9:07:00 PM
Passionate write about the moon, you would make me fall in love with nature too. ;) Gert wrote something in Afrikaans which is my home language, thanks for the laughs with your comment Nick
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Date: 9/20/2010 9:15:00 AM
Sweet and delicious words Nick and romantic beyond the stars.. your first verse is captivating luv.. and the rest of this piece is breathtaking as well.. enjoyed my friend.. have a happy day..did u see my wedding photos on my blog yet?
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Date: 9/14/2010 5:07:00 PM
Stunningly beautiful Nick.. hope u entered it in the Love Notes contest by Catie... if so good luck my friend.. hope to see more of u soon.. did u see my wedding photos on my blog???
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Date: 9/14/2010 10:44:00 AM
Enjoyed the romantic touch in this one with the surprise ending...Glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
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Date: 9/14/2010 5:06:00 AM
pretty write, enjoyed today!
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