Until My Dying Day

Until My Dying Day

To me, greatest all of my poems are
They always will be the best by far
In my mind and what was intended
Hoping thoughts are easily apprehended.

Poetry perfection was far from my mind
Would be blessed if you could be so kind
To either like my each poem or pretend
Positive thoughts to me shall start to send.

To write more poems, I can hardly wait
After reading them, they then will radiate
Throughout your very being and soul
Inspire you to write poems is my goal.

So perfectly quiet everything became
Love and appreciate more of the same
By my poems you have been blown away
Will write more and more until my dying day.

James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran and Poet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 9:05 AM
Wonderful poem. It certainly is wonderful to crystallize our thoughts into little immortalized gems.
Nance Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 6:28 PM
Congrats on poem of the day!
Horn Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 10:56 PM
And you are number one and my most recent comment I have to respond to. It is very interesting where everyone comes from. Just returned from trip to British Isles ending up at Normandy and taking in Stonehenge. So many things to see. Jim Horn
Roper Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 9:05 PM
Congratulations on Poem of the Day , James, wonderful write and a 7+++
Horn Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 10:52 PM
And a rousing number three. The Potter Magic hat said it is all of your great support that makes Poetry Soup happen. My greatness is only based on the greatness you are willing to allow me to have. Without you I am nothing. Jim Horn
Meade Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 8:57 PM
A word-lover, crafting each sentence with care - - it is this passion that makes all the difference my friend.
Horn Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 10:49 PM
And the mind-boggling number four. That is you to the fullest with all of your great contributions for us to read on Poetry Soup. No. The difference is all of your support providing me with the initiative to write poems. Jim Horn
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June 14, 2015 at 8:48 PM
Wonderful write, and yes, inspiring! Congrats on being chosen TPOD!! Hugs, Rhonda
Horn Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 10:47 PM
And a walloping, nice number five. My biggest problem is finding time to read some of your great poems. I am so glad and appreciate you being a part of Poetry Soup and supporting me with all of your positive comments. Whew. Four more to go. Jim Horn
Holmes Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 5:45 PM
Nice write James...look forward to reading more!...Peter
Horn Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 10:44 PM
And a great number six. I am getting there. I really appreciate everyone's comments. All of you are what makes Poetry Soup really worth having as far as I am concerned. Jim Horn
Anish Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 1:41 PM
Glad to see that you are dedicated to your art! Congratulations on being the POTD! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Horn Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 10:41 PM
And you are number 8. I am getting there and want to be sure and thank all of you great people poets. All of you at Poetry Soup together are what contributes to everyone's greatness. Jim Horn
Manassian Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 1:28 PM
Congrats on POTD! :) To inspire others to write is a noble thing, James. To blow people away with words is a wonderful gift. Hugs
Horn Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 10:39 PM
And you are the lovely number nine who I enjoy and appreciate. Didn't you just graduate from College with an MA? Jim Horn
Callus Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 11:56 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, James. Good to see that your appetite for writing is as great as ever! All the best. // paul
Horn Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 10:37 PM
And you are the great number 10 reply. Feel like I am Harry Potter talking to the magic hat. No, it is not me. It is all of you on Poetry Soup who are great. Jim Horn
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 10:44 AM
- Congrats on your p.o.t.d. !! - // Anne-Lise :)
Horn Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 10:35 PM
Aha ha. Eleven more to go. Do you know what is great about my poems. They all think that everyone in Poetry Soup is great just like you. Jim Horn
Bateman Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 9:39 AM
Congratulations on POTD Jim!! Very well-done!! Best Always, Gary (P.S. And may many more poems be ahead of you my friend. Keep Writing!!)
Horn Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 10:33 PM
Aha. 12 more to go. Two retired veterans in two days for POTD. Wow. Jim Horn
Y. Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 9:37 AM
Congrats on getting the poem of the day:)
Horn Avatar
June 15, 2015 at 10:31 PM
Good heavens. I have 13 other poets to respond to. Am starting with you because you are the earliest. Thanks a bunch. I didn't get it. You gave it to me. Jim Horn
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