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Until I'M With You

A bitter breeze undulates - a chilly warning I feel Palm trees sway in discontented passage - they splinter the sunlight Interrupted melody of tenderness, until I’m with you

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/3/2018 5:29:00 PM

Oh... Mike, a beautiful love poem.Even those it is a Sijo poem. Have a nice evening my friend. xxx-oo.

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/3/2018 6:16:00 PM

Thank you so much, Darlene and a warm, lovely evening I wish for you xxoo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/7/2018 1:30:00 PM

Back with congratulations, Mike! ~ gw

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/7/2018 1:58:00 PM

Thanks GW !!

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/2/2018 10:35:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/3/2018 10:41:00 AM

Thanks so much Line xxoo

Roy Pett

Date: 6/2/2018 2:06:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Mike with your excellent Sijo. :))

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/2/2018 7:27:00 PM

Thanks so much Roy!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/1/2018 6:37:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Sijo poem, Mike :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/1/2018 7:17:00 AM

Thanks so much, Anne-Lise xxoo

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/31/2018 11:56:00 PM

Well expressed and beautiful. Congratulations for your win Mike! Thank you for entering my contest :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 6/1/2018 7:17:00 AM

Thank you so much Heidi, it was great fun xxoo

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/31/2018 1:49:00 PM

Excellent, Mike! Janice

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/31/2018 2:33:00 PM

Thank you Janice xxoo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/30/2018 4:28:00 PM

Charming poetry..a winning entry Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/30/2018 7:17:00 PM

Thank you Vijay!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/30/2018 3:08:00 PM

Nice. Smooth as silk. xomo

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/30/2018 3:15:00 PM

Ditto! :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/30/2018 3:10:00 PM

Thank you Maureen xxoo Happy Wednesday!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/30/2018 2:55:00 PM

- Lovely written, Mike ... my favorite line is the last one :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/30/2018 2:59:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise, I always appreciate your kind words xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/30/2018 2:33:00 PM

Hello Mike, a lovely picture you painted with your words. I could see the trees sway in the breeze. Enjoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend. xxxx-oooo.

Mike Gentile
Date: 5/30/2018 2:58:00 PM

Thanks so much, Darlene I am glad you liked it xxoo