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Until I'M With You

A bitter breeze undulates - a chilly warning I feel
Palm trees sway in discontented passage - they splinter the sunlight
Interrupted melody of tenderness, until I’m with you

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Darlene De Beaulieu

September 3, 2018 at 5:29 PM

Oh... Mike, a beautiful love poem.Even those it is a Sijo poem. Have a nice evening my friend. xxx-oo.

Mike Gentile

September 3, 2018 at 6:16 PM

Thank you so much, Darlene and a warm, lovely evening I wish for you xxoo

Gershon Wolf

June 7, 2018 at 1:30 PM

Back with congratulations, Mike! ~ gw

Mike Gentile

June 7, 2018 at 1:58 PM

Thanks GW !!

Line Gauthier

June 2, 2018 at 10:35 PM

Congrats on your win, Mike.

Mike Gentile

June 3, 2018 at 10:41 AM

Thanks so much Line xxoo

Roy Pett

June 2, 2018 at 2:06 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Mike with your excellent Sijo. :))

Mike Gentile

June 2, 2018 at 7:27 PM

Thanks so much Roy!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 1, 2018 at 6:37 AM

- Congratulations on your Sijo poem, Mike :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile

June 1, 2018 at 7:17 AM

Thanks so much, Anne-Lise xxoo

Heidi Sands

May 31, 2018 at 11:56 PM

Well expressed and beautiful. Congratulations for your win Mike! Thank you for entering my contest :)

Mike Gentile

June 1, 2018 at 7:17 AM

Thank you so much Heidi, it was great fun xxoo

Janice Canerdy

May 31, 2018 at 1:49 PM

Excellent, Mike! Janice

Mike Gentile

May 31, 2018 at 2:33 PM

Thank you Janice xxoo

Vijay Pandit

May 30, 2018 at 4:28 PM

Charming poetry..a winning entry Mike.

Mike Gentile

May 30, 2018 at 7:17 PM

Thank you Vijay!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 30, 2018 at 3:08 PM

Nice. Smooth as silk. xomo

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

May 30, 2018 at 3:15 PM

Ditto! :)

Mike Gentile

May 30, 2018 at 3:10 PM

Thank you Maureen xxoo Happy Wednesday!

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 30, 2018 at 2:55 PM

- Lovely written, Mike ... my favorite line is the last one :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile

May 30, 2018 at 2:59 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise, I always appreciate your kind words xxoo

Darlene De Beaulieu

May 30, 2018 at 2:33 PM

Hello Mike, a lovely picture you painted with your words. I could see the trees sway in the breeze. Enjoyed this poem. have a nice day my friend. xxxx-oooo.

Mike Gentile

May 30, 2018 at 2:58 PM

Thanks so much, Darlene I am glad you liked it xxoo