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Just imagine this life without music or any desert without an oasis or darkness without light or a day without the sun or food, unseasoned without salt to taste or strong black coffee without cream and sugar or a garden in spring without flowers in bloom or the sky without the moon and stars Oh yes, it's true, my darling It is indeed unthinkable to be so starved...of your love! STRAND PICK 3,any theme,any form Contest (Winner: 1st Place) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date submitted: 04/06/2020 Anything You Want Poetry Contest(N/A) Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke Date written and submitted: 11/02/2019 Writing Challenge - December - Any Poem Na'd In November 2019 Poetry Sponsored by: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode (Winner: 3rd Place) Submitten on 12/03/2019

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Date: 4/7/2020 11:49:00 PM
Edward wonderful contrasts in delightful images - "food, unseasoned without taste." Congratulations on your first place win!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/8/2020 6:08:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sam:-) It's always good to hear from you!
Date: 12/10/2019 7:24:00 PM
Edward congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem and I love your image too, well done!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/11/2019 2:45:00 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, Constance!:-) Most obliged.
Date: 11/6/2019 7:45:00 PM
this is wonderful, Edward!!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/6/2019 9:51:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!:-)
Date: 11/6/2019 2:24:00 PM
lovely romantic write
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/6/2019 9:50:00 PM
Thank you, Jack!:-)
Date: 11/5/2019 8:07:00 PM
Beautiful, creative, and romantic, Edward. Janice
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/5/2019 8:19:00 PM
Thank you, Janice:-)
Date: 11/3/2019 5:48:00 AM
sounds like love my friend.. sweet poem..
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/3/2019 7:47:00 AM
Thank you, Silent One:-)
Date: 11/2/2019 8:29:00 PM
Very sweet and romantic, love how you formatted it - gave it an extra punch. Good luck in the contest and all else ... CayCay
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 11/3/2019 5:36:00 AM
Thank you very much, CayCay:-)

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