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Untethered Threads

Like a thistle seed at the mercy of the wind; I cling to tufts of untethered threads. I've no roots, no destination, no destiny and no ambitions. Like a snowflake in a flurry: I'm both unique, and commonplace; as I drift through life. But you are like a fledged dove, riding the wind on wings of hope; in complete control. You're my breath, my soul, my everything. You are the breeze that carries me aloft: teaching me to fly like the birds and feel one with the wind.
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July 29, 2021 at 2:34 PM
Hi Emile, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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July 29, 2021 at 6:44 AM
Sorry, I've not been around.. Not much free time at the moment, and that means not enough time for Poetry Soup... Thank you for writing for my contest and apologies it took so long to judge.. Congratulations on your placement...
Pinet Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 7:43 AM
Thanks, Silent One, we all have our priorities in life my friend, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Stathakis Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 8:03 PM
Love the similes that you have created. Well done and congratulations!
Pinet Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 7:10 AM
Thanks George, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Seeker Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 8:56 PM
Superb! Congrats on your win Emile, with this new format/ style
Pinet Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 7:16 AM
Thanks, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Merryman Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 11:44 AM
Excellent contrasts in this romantic piece! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
Pinet Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 12:16 PM
Thanks Kim, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Ibeh Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 6:10 AM
Superb penning, Emile:-) This looks like a winner to me. Good luck in the contest!
Pinet Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 8:09 AM
Thanks Edward, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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