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Like a thistle seed at the mercy of the wind; I cling to tufts of untethered threads. I've no roots, no destination, no destiny and no ambitions. Like a snowflake in a flurry: I'm both unique, and commonplace; as I drift through life. But you are like a fledged dove, riding the wind on wings of hope; in complete control. You're my breath, my soul, my everything. You are the breeze that carries me aloft: teaching me to fly like the birds and feel one with the wind.

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Date: 7/29/2021 2:34:00 PM
Hi Emile, Congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/29/2021 6:44:00 AM
Sorry, I've not been around.. Not much free time at the moment, and that means not enough time for Poetry Soup... Thank you for writing for my contest and apologies it took so long to judge.. Congratulations on your placement...
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Date: 7/29/2021 7:43:00 AM
Thanks, Silent One, we all have our priorities in life my friend, I appreciate your comments, Emile.
Date: 4/12/2021 8:03:00 PM
Love the similes that you have created. Well done and congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/13/2021 7:10:00 AM
Thanks George, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/11/2021 8:56:00 PM
Superb! Congrats on your win Emile, with this new format/ style
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/12/2021 7:16:00 AM
Thanks, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/11/2021 11:44:00 AM
Excellent contrasts in this romantic piece! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/11/2021 12:16:00 PM
Thanks Kim, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/9/2021 6:10:00 AM
Superb penning, Emile:-) This looks like a winner to me. Good luck in the contest!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/9/2021 8:09:00 AM
Thanks Edward, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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