Untethered

Salt tears drip from leaves, 
to land on tea-colored pages.
Hopes and dreams, 
written in the ink of history,
slowly blur and drip 
into the underworld of the
abandoned and long forgotten.

Salt waters of the ocean
and tumbling waves turn 
stones and pebbles to sand,
erasing familiar shapes
and throwing up barriers
to once precious memories.

Dimming eyes look out on
unfamiliar landscapes of a mind
inching inexorably into
a vast emptiness that steals 
learned behaviors, abilities,
and the past, leaving nothing.

The empty eyes wander
but do not understand, for
the spirit that occupied this frame
has broken earthly chains.
It now soars free, no longer captive
to expectations and this mortal life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hoffman Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 5:01 AM
Beautifully heartfelt and emotive. Brilliant writing, my friend.
Peckham Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 11:29 AM
I'm sorry I didn't see your comment before and reply. I appreciate the read and the great comment!
Douglas 16 Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 7:08 AM
This is amazing You are a great poet
Peckham Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 11:30 AM
I'm sorry I am so remiss about replying to your comment. I really appreciate your reading my work and commenting. Thank you.
Zeitlin Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 8:20 PM
Great work.
Peckham Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 11:31 AM
Thanks so much for your kind comment, albeit a little late. I do appreciate it!
Sambourne Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 6:10 PM
You are a fine poet Barbara, + you have truly found your voice on Poetrysoup. Another fine write here that has emotional impact. Be well. Brian
Perna Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 5:14 PM
Lovely writing! I enjoyed very much, great details too!
Peckham Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 11:32 AM
I am rather late, but I do want to thank you for reading and writing such a nice comment.
Clarke Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 7:41 AM
Really beautiful and mesmerising. A really captivating piece Barbara :-)
Peckham Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 7:51 AM
Thank you very much for reading my piece and making such a nice comment. I really appreciate it.
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