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Untethered

Salt tears drip from leaves, to land on tea-colored pages. Hopes and dreams, written in the ink of history, slowly blur and drip into the underworld of the abandoned and long forgotten. Salt waters of the ocean and tumbling waves turn stones and pebbles to sand, erasing familiar shapes and throwing up barriers to once precious memories. Dimming eyes look out on unfamiliar landscapes of a mind inching inexorably into a vast emptiness that steals learned behaviors, abilities, and the past, leaving nothing. The empty eyes wander but do not understand, for the spirit that occupied this frame has broken earthly chains. It now soars free, no longer captive to expectations and this mortal life.

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Date: 7/11/2023 5:01:00 AM
Beautifully heartfelt and emotive. Brilliant writing, my friend.
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 11/30/2023 11:29:00 AM
I'm sorry I didn't see your comment before and reply. I appreciate the read and the great comment!
Date: 7/9/2023 7:08:00 AM
This is amazing You are a great poet
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 11/30/2023 11:30:00 AM
I'm sorry I am so remiss about replying to your comment. I really appreciate your reading my work and commenting. Thank you.
Date: 7/7/2023 8:20:00 PM
Great work.
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 11/30/2023 11:31:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind comment, albeit a little late. I do appreciate it!
Date: 7/7/2023 6:10:00 PM
You are a fine poet Barbara, + you have truly found your voice on Poetrysoup. Another fine write here that has emotional impact. Be well. Brian
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Date: 7/7/2023 5:14:00 PM
Lovely writing! I enjoyed very much, great details too!
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 11/30/2023 11:32:00 AM
I am rather late, but I do want to thank you for reading and writing such a nice comment.
Date: 4/16/2023 7:41:00 AM
Really beautiful and mesmerising. A really captivating piece Barbara :-)
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Barbara Peckham
Date: 4/16/2023 7:51:00 AM
Thank you very much for reading my piece and making such a nice comment. I really appreciate it.

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