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Untamed Rose

Untamed Rose

                                                         Wild
                                                         Rose
                                                      Untamed 
                                                   Rose unfolds, 
                                                  Velvety feeling 
                                     with the breath of many flowers 
                             Gives intense curiosity to embrace the rose 
    Butterflies and bees dancing on the open petals with pleasure seeking the nectar

 3/11/2015
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Fraser Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 2:30 PM
Such beautiful imagery Eve, and Roses, poems about Roses I so love, hugs//James :)
Roper Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 2:25 PM
Thanks you, James, for the lovely comment dear friend. May your garden be full of beautiful roses :) - Happy weekend !! - hugs
Cervenka Avatar
March 13, 2015 at 8:16 AM
Very lovely, Now I can't wait for my roses to bloom and the flowerbeds to realize it's Spring.
Roper Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 2:26 PM
roses
Roper Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 2:23 PM
Thanks for the lovely comments dear friend, hope all your rosses come to bloom :) - Happy weekend !! - hugs
Pinet Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 6:21 PM
Your descriptive wording and great imagery brought it all to life with zest and color. Emile.
Roper Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 2:27 PM
Thanks you, Emile, for the lovely comments dear friend. It truely means a lot. Blessings :) - Happy weekend !! - hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 12:38 PM
Enchanting and a seven, dear Eve!
Roper Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 2:33 PM
Thanks for the lovely comments and a 7 dear friend :) May your garden keep growing to give the sweet scents- Happy weekend !! - hugs
Devnath  Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 11:33 AM
Wow! it's nice. A classic beauty of dance of butterflies and bees on rose is adorned with exact natural colors, wonderfully done. 7++ i feel. Good luck and wish you sure to win. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Roper Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 2:34 PM
Thanks you,B.L.Devnath, for the lovely inspiring comments and a 7 dear friend :) - Happy weekend !! - hugs
Allison Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 5:44 AM
so beautifully penned Eve - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 2:35 PM
Thank you sweet friend, Blessing and Hugs
Andresen Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 4:26 AM
- Beautifully dear Eve !!! - Thank you - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 2:36 PM
Thanks you for the lovely comments dear friend :) - Happy weekend !! - hugs
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
March 12, 2015 at 12:18 AM
The bold beauty of a wild rose...very lovely, Eve...hugs, Rhonda
Roper Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 2:37 PM
Thanks for the lovely inspiring comments dear friend :) - Happy weekend !! - Blessings
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