Untamed Rose

Untamed Rose

                                                         Wild
                                                         Rose
                                                      Untamed 
                                                   Rose unfolds, 
                                                  Velvety feeling 
                                     with the breath of many flowers 
                             Gives intense curiosity to embrace the rose 
    Butterflies and bees dancing on the open petals with pleasure seeking the nectar

 3/11/2015
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James Fraser

Date: 3/13/2015 2:30:00 PM

Such beautiful imagery Eve, and Roses, poems about Roses I so love, hugs//James :)

Eve Roper
Date: 3/14/2015 2:25:00 PM

Thanks you, James, for the lovely comment dear friend. May your garden be full of beautiful roses :) - Happy weekend !! - hugs

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 3/13/2015 8:16:00 AM

Very lovely, Now I can't wait for my roses to bloom and the flowerbeds to realize it's Spring.

Eve Roper
Date: 3/14/2015 2:26:00 PM

roses

Eve Roper
Date: 3/14/2015 2:23:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comments dear friend, hope all your rosses come to bloom :) - Happy weekend !! - hugs

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/12/2015 6:21:00 PM

Your descriptive wording and great imagery brought it all to life with zest and color. Emile.

Eve Roper
Date: 3/14/2015 2:27:00 PM

Thanks you, Emile, for the lovely comments dear friend. It truely means a lot. Blessings :) - Happy weekend !! - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/12/2015 12:38:00 PM

Enchanting and a seven, dear Eve!

Eve Roper
Date: 3/14/2015 2:33:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely comments and a 7 dear friend :) May your garden keep growing to give the sweet scents- Happy weekend !! - hugs

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/12/2015 11:33:00 AM

Wow! it's nice. A classic beauty of dance of butterflies and bees on rose is adorned with exact natural colors, wonderfully done. 7++ i feel. Good luck and wish you sure to win. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Eve Roper
Date: 3/14/2015 2:34:00 PM

Thanks you,B.L.Devnath, for the lovely inspiring comments and a 7 dear friend :) - Happy weekend !! - hugs