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Untamed Heart

Movie: Untamed Heart "AN UNTAMED HEART HAPPENED TO BE MY BELOVED'S WEAKNESS" A first date is so full of lingering whispers and sweet romances, AN UNTAMED HEART can beat faster given many wonderful chances- He held my hand gently as we shared silly nervous glances, to think it all started being in the same high school classes. We saw a moving picture of a young ill man with a heart condition, it was no coincidence that this story HAPPENED to be non-fiction- See, this man I was falling in love was diagnosed by his pediatrician, since a young boy he suffered from leukemia but now he’s in remission. When I heard the news that same night sitting at the down town bistro, my heart broke in a million pieces and at first I wanted TO quickly go- But my intuition remained at peace as I listened and went with the flow, for I realized my soul had been connected to this man I longed to know. With our hearts untamed we had uncontrollable desirous nights, passion beyond comprehension noticing each other’s magnificent sights- I thirsted for his touch and we craved to reach all the fervent heights, he needed me to walk down the aisle, and BE his kindle to ignite. Remission can only last so long and I knew the day would arrive, when MY BELOVED'S health would decline and he would not survive- The end of his life was spent in a hospital bed when he was only thirty-five, the blue line went flat and his debilitated heart they could not revive. I stayed and held his hand and laid my head upon his warm chest, it was tamed with WEAKNESS as my heart was still full of zest- Little did I know at sixteen this heartbreak would be my greatest test, I took a sigh of relief, for my beloved’s heart was finally at peaceful rest. Movie Mania Contest Sponsor: Nicola Byrne Date Written: September 12, 2016

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Date: 10/5/2016 1:29:00 AM
Hi Laua, Omg! I really love this movie. The end was so sad. WoW! Untamed Heart inspired you to write a sad love story. I could see the similarities between this write and the movie. Great job. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved.A without a doubt seven: -) Alexis
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Date: 10/5/2016 6:59:00 AM
I know it's soooo sad right!!! I remember when I first saw it with my hubby and I cried like a baby. Well, it was on TV a few months ago and remembered how much I loved it! thanks Alexis :)-luloo
Date: 10/5/2016 12:35:00 AM
This is a truly awesome and heartfelt poem. I enjoyed reading it. Congratulations :)
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Date: 10/5/2016 6:58:00 AM
thank you Darren, I love penguins... :)-luloo
Date: 10/4/2016 11:58:00 PM
Very heart touching and emotionally moving poem, Laura. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/5/2016 6:57:00 AM
thank you Afzal :)-luloo
Date: 10/4/2016 10:11:00 PM
Loss creates many a poet. Love the "BE his kindle to ignite" line. Three fav actors: Christian Slater, Marisa Tomei, Rosie Perez. Congrats, Laura! :-)
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Date: 10/5/2016 6:57:00 AM
lol thanks Tom :)-luloo
Date: 9/12/2016 1:52:00 PM
oh this is soooooo sad LuLoo - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/12/2016 2:38:00 PM
thank you sweet Jan :)-luloo

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