Untamed

Unstoppable beauty,
Ultra wild wildflowers,
Under plum windswept skies!
Uplifting gay colors.
Unspoilt rampant meadow,
Unwilling to be bound.
Unusual colors.


Written on May 1, 2021
For: Pleiades U Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 3:28 AM
Ahh!! Great description of that beautiful scene. Way to go. Congrats on this winner. Sara
Buehler Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 10:45 AM
Thank you for the kind, thoughtful sentiments.
Merryman Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 7:07 PM
A beautiful descriptive write, Evelyn! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Buehler Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 7:44 PM
I appreciate those fine sentiments, Kim. Thank you for sponsoring such a delightful contest. Kindest regards, Evelyn
Allison Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 3:09 PM
I love to see wildflowers, many congrats on your win Evelyn :-) hugs Jan xx
Buehler Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 3:44 PM
Yes, wild is beautiful. Thank you, Jan. hugs Evelyn xx :D
Rodrigues Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 1:28 PM
Congratulations!
Buehler Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 3:41 PM
Thank you so much.
Alex Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Congratulations!
Buehler Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 11:36 AM
Thank you, Christuraj. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 1:42 AM
Great title. Loved your Pleiades. Best for a win.
Buehler Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 11:31 AM
Many thanks, Victor.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 2, 2021 at 1:38 AM
A beautiful winner in the making! To see through your eyes, sweet lady...
Buehler Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 11:31 AM
Thank you for the lovely thoughts, dear Kim.
Y. Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 8:00 PM
WoW! Evelyn, You did a fantastic job with the letter U. You made it look easy. As always, good content and imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great evening, my friend:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 8:52 PM
That makes me feel just super, Alexis! This is my second pleiades poem, and I am finding this form to be enjoyable to write. Thanks so much for your lovely comment. All my best, dear Alexis. :)
Ball Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 7:01 PM
Nicely done Evelyn. It has such an upbeat and positive feel to it. Well done and good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
Buehler Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 8:53 PM
Thank you for your warm thoughts and well wishes, Judy. Blessings, Evelyn
Pettit Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 6:12 PM
I like this write, and I'm sure Kim will also.
Buehler Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 8:55 PM
That is so nice to hear. Thank you, Robert. :)
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