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Untamed

shoreless bounding main
          veiled magic in such splendor
               laughing at its yoke


Water Themed Haiku Contest
Sponsored by Tania Kitchen
08/14/2018

Copyright © Charlie Smith | Year Posted 2018

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Mahtab Bangalee

June 25, 2019 at 1:31 AM

beautiful; enjoyed

Connie Marcum Wong

November 16, 2018 at 1:35 AM

A creative haiku Charlie. I enjoyed it! : )

November 14, 2018 at 3:13 PM

Creative work. Way to go. Enjoyed reading this one. Sara

November 15, 2018 at 11:35 AM

Thank you Sara...

Vladislav Raven

October 8, 2018 at 4:37 PM

A wonderful Haiku Charlie. Love the image. This is a winner that goes into my Haiku faves. Have a wonderful end to your Monday Charlie. Your friend always....Mike.

November 15, 2018 at 11:36 AM

Thank you Mike...

October 5, 2018 at 7:51 AM

Wonderful haiku, Charlie. I especially liked the last line. ~Warren

October 5, 2018 at 10:48 AM

Thank you Warren...

August 24, 2018 at 4:37 PM

great imagery in your haiku, Charlie

August 25, 2018 at 9:05 AM

Thank you Agnes...

August 20, 2018 at 4:14 PM

You caught my attention, especially the end line...I'm surprised that this is not on the winners' list, Charlie:( Regards // paul

August 21, 2018 at 1:55 PM

Thanks Paul, just kinda goes that way...

August 20, 2018 at 8:32 AM

Well written haiku, Charlie. This is a winner.

August 20, 2018 at 9:37 AM

Thank you Warren...

August 16, 2018 at 7:36 PM

a winner for me, charlie... enjoyed the aha moment... huggs

August 20, 2018 at 9:37 AM

Thank you Nette...

August 15, 2018 at 4:46 PM

Great imagery Charlie... Great haiku..

August 16, 2018 at 9:52 AM

Thanks Silent One...

August 15, 2018 at 9:08 AM

amen to the breaking of any unwelcome tethers. Best wishes in the "Water haiku" contest. Shalom, shalom Charlie

August 16, 2018 at 9:42 AM

Thank you Anil...

August 14, 2018 at 4:40 PM

Great one Charlie ! :)

August 16, 2018 at 9:38 AM

Thanks Heidi...

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