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shoreless bounding main veiled magic in such splendor laughing at its yoke Water Themed Haiku Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchen 08/14/2018

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Date: 6/25/2019 1:31:00 AM
beautiful; enjoyed
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Date: 11/16/2018 1:35:00 AM
A creative haiku Charlie. I enjoyed it! : )
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Date: 11/14/2018 3:13:00 PM
Creative work. Way to go. Enjoyed reading this one. Sara
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Date: 11/15/2018 11:35:00 AM
Thank you Sara...
Date: 10/8/2018 4:37:00 PM
A wonderful Haiku Charlie. Love the image. This is a winner that goes into my Haiku faves. Have a wonderful end to your Monday Charlie. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 11/15/2018 11:36:00 AM
Thank you Mike...
Date: 10/5/2018 7:51:00 AM
Wonderful haiku, Charlie. I especially liked the last line. ~Warren
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Date: 10/5/2018 10:48:00 AM
Thank you Warren...
Date: 8/24/2018 4:37:00 PM
great imagery in your haiku, Charlie
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Date: 8/25/2018 9:05:00 AM
Thank you Agnes...
Date: 8/20/2018 4:14:00 PM
You caught my attention, especially the end line...I'm surprised that this is not on the winners' list, Charlie:( Regards // paul
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Date: 8/21/2018 1:55:00 PM
Thanks Paul, just kinda goes that way...
Date: 8/20/2018 8:32:00 AM
Well written haiku, Charlie. This is a winner.
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Date: 8/20/2018 9:37:00 AM
Thank you Warren...
Date: 8/16/2018 7:36:00 PM
a winner for me, charlie... enjoyed the aha moment... huggs
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Date: 8/20/2018 9:37:00 AM
Thank you Nette...
Date: 8/15/2018 4:46:00 PM
Great imagery Charlie... Great haiku..
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Date: 8/16/2018 9:52:00 AM
Thanks Silent One...
Date: 8/15/2018 9:08:00 AM
amen to the breaking of any unwelcome tethers. Best wishes in the "Water haiku" contest. Shalom, shalom Charlie
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Date: 8/16/2018 9:42:00 AM
Thank you Anil...
Date: 8/14/2018 4:40:00 PM
Great one Charlie ! :)
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Date: 8/16/2018 9:38:00 AM
Thanks Heidi...