Unsuspecting River

The crystal clear water flows.



A bridge collapses in seconds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 2:18 PM
Great write that could be filled in so many ways from spiritual to worldly. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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February 5, 2010 at 7:53 PM
Great entry for Brian's contest Brandee and good luck and much success with this imagism piece from your gifted pen... my entry is Outburst... always nice to read your poetry... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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February 5, 2010 at 10:06 AM
I have enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Brandee. Wishing you the best in the contest. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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February 4, 2010 at 11:45 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Brandee.Rgds Brian
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