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Unsure Economy

Dancing butterflies, await
Optimism holds, nothing is secure
A nation pauses.

confusionhopelifepeoplepoliticalhaiku

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Nathaniel Köhp

February 24, 2009 at 2:58 PM

I love the butterfly metaphor. The frail wings, the creature you can crush in your hands. Definitely a good symbol for everything which is going on in economy and even politics. Well done! Nathaniel

Gregory Golden

February 13, 2009 at 9:40 PM

The butterfly flies through this ring of fire. We all stand at the water's edge. A superbly written Haiku Poem. It sings with resonance. Keep sharing.

February 12, 2009 at 12:27 PM

Much to think about in your words. This is a timely poem. Yes, we need some optimism to hang onto. Nice job! Thank you for your kind words regarding my haiku. Keep on writing! Karen