Unsung Hero - the Soldier

Unsung Hero – The Soldier

Warily he stood at the corner,
Wondering which way to turn.
A weary smile on his faded brow,
As he held out an old worn-out hat hoping for handouts,
A few miserly pennies or perhaps, even a piece of bread.

This once proud soldier,
Now reduced to being a petty beggar,
Was a remnant of a cruel war;
Where he once stood side-by-side with his comrades
And helplessly watched them fall one-by-one.

Cruel memories haunted his saddened heart,
As he each day he desperately tried to survive, 
Wondering if it would have been better
If he too on the bloody battlefield had died - 
But there was no real answer.

Maybe it was good that he had done his duty
Fighting for those who couldn’t. 
But now he was forgotten and forlorn, 
With no honor, no glory,
He was just a nobody.

With warm tears streaming down his cold cheeks,
Even now he thought of his fallen comrades, 
Questioning if they were really in a better place -
What if?
Why?

His thoughts about his tortured past
Continued to cling to him, 
Like the tattered coat 
He wore during the day,
And used for a pillow at night.

In his mind, he was still on the battlefield, 
Only this time he battled invisible foes -
A mind growing feeble, homelessness,
Hunger, loneliness, and most of all – 
Not having anyone to love him. 




9-16-2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 5:05 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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April 20, 2016 at 11:41 PM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Ayala Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 10:07 AM
Thank you so much my poet friend for your kind words! Hugs. Kika
A   Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 12:17 PM
kika ayala, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
Ayala Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 11:23 PM
Hi Linda, thanks very much for your visit and kind words about my poetry. Best wishes to you and have a nice day! Kika
Staton Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 4:04 PM
Wonderful composition. Great imagery!
Ayala Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 11:22 PM
Hi Valerie, what a wonderful compliment you have left for me! You made my day! Thank you so much! I look forward to reading your works! Kika
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January 8, 2016 at 7:42 PM
Kika, CONGRATS on your Awesome win.... SKAT
Ayala Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 6:24 PM
Hi Skat, this means a lot to me! Thank you so much! Kika
Mcloughlin Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 5:07 AM
So sad Kika, full of emotion. Congrats on your win! From Jean
Ayala Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 6:23 PM
Thank you Jean, I appreciate your kind congratulations. Kika
A   Avatar
December 30, 2015 at 12:25 PM
A deep write, kika... Happy New Years... Always ~LINDA~
Ayala Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 8:06 PM
Thank you my friend, and happy New year to you too, Lovely Linda! Kika
Stone Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 1:51 PM
thanks for all the great poems you have written they really inspired me
Ayala Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 5:48 PM
Awww! Dear Dylan, what a wonderful compliment you have left for me! You made my day! Thank you so much! I look forward to reading your works! Kika
A. Sharma Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 1:33 AM
Congrats on your superb winning write Kika!
Ayala Avatar
September 11, 2015 at 9:58 PM
Hi Dr. Sharma, thanks very much for your visit and kind words about my poetry. Best wishes to you and have a nice day! Kika
Sietesantos Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 5:50 PM
Hi Kika, once again congratulations on another well-deserved win for this piece! Well done, my friend! Pandita
Ayala Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 9:40 PM
I am so happy with this win. This piece is so special to me and I am glad that my fellow poets appreciate it! Thanks, Pandita! Kika
A  Avatar
July 27, 2015 at 2:28 PM
Kika, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
Ayala Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 7:36 PM
Thank you dear friend for your kind words and for reading my poem. I have been ill. But today is a good day:-) Stay well! Kika
Pinet Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 1:19 PM
A heart felt sad poem that describes the pain of war and politics that discard the soldier that gave their all for freedom and country. All soldiers even the ones on the other side are someone’s father, mother, brother, son, sister or loved one and we sometimes loose sights of that after the fighting is done and we cut them loose. Emile. #7
Ayala Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 1:43 PM
Dear Emile, your words are so true! It's so sad and shameful how our real heroes are treated! Thank you so much for your lovely comments and high rating. Have a nice Sunday! Kika
Roper Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 10:00 AM
Excellent write, Kika, a great tribute to our unsung heroes! So many still having nightmares of the past. Hugs Eve
Ayala Avatar
June 27, 2015 at 9:51 AM
Hi Eve, thanks very much for your visit and kind words about my poetry. Best wishes ti you and have a nice day! Kika
Eastman Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 10:15 AM
VERY Touching! A tremendous write... My son is in the army infantry... My worries for him... are written here... even before his first deployment... He's finishing basic training now... This will be a favorite... It expresses so much.
Ayala Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 10:37 PM
Hi Carol, I thank you so much for commenting and complimenting this piece. I know how you feel as I have a grandson who is in the Army and we worry about him all the time. I will keep your son in my prayers that God will protect him from all harm. Have a blessed 2015, my friend! Kika.
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January 2, 2015 at 3:16 PM
Hi Kika, I am just circling back with my congratulations on a great top-of-the-class win! Bravo! Pandita.
Ayala Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 3:23 PM
Hi Pandita, thanks again for visiting and commenting on this piece! Best wishes always, my friend! Kika.
Kayode Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 3:49 AM
Nice one, congrats Kika...huggs
Ayala Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 3:13 PM
Hi Kayode, thank you for visiting me and complimenting my work! With much appreciation, Kika.
A   Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 6:52 PM
Kika,, thank you for supporting one of the many, contest I ran last year. Dropping by to say hi in hopes you are enjoying the first day of 2015 :) :) Stop by my latest blog "You Call This Poetry" if you'd like. Enjoy the win, I sure did. Love Linda
Ayala Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 3:10 PM
Hi Linda, I am so happy to win a placement in your contest! Thank you so much! Best wishes to you for a great year! Kika.
Allison Avatar
January 1, 2015 at 6:47 PM
such a powerful and touching write - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Ayala Avatar
January 2, 2015 at 3:09 PM
Hi Jan, thanks for complimenting my work. I really appreciate it! Best wishes to you! Kika.
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December 20, 2014 at 11:12 AM
- Hey, Kika - a touching, but lovely poem! - .... a Christmas smile to you :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Ayala Avatar
December 24, 2014 at 10:06 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for your kind compliments which I appreciate! I pray that you will have a wonderful Christmas and a very fulfilling 2015! All the very best to you, Kika.
Perumal Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 3:00 AM
A TOUCHING ONE.WONDERFULLY PENNED.
Ayala Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 3:28 PM
Hi Rohini, thank you so much for complimenting my work. Warm regards. Kika
Itsoghole Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 2:43 PM
War in the mind is deadlier than physical battle. When life has no essence, death is essential!
Ayala Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 3:28 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments which I appreciate! Kika
Mcdaid Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 4:35 PM
touching deeply beautifully penned kika
Ayala Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 3:27 PM
Liam, I am glad you liked this one! Thank you so much! Kika
Kiser Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 11:45 PM
Powerful and moving imagery, indeed.
Ayala Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 1:02 PM
ML, thank you for stopping by and for leaving these nice compliments about my work! Best wishes, Kika
Konos Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 4:21 PM
Thank you for sharing "Unsung Hero". It hits hard because literally our veterans have not been cared for. Almost if not a, Love The War, Not The Warrior!
Ayala Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 4:31 PM
Hi Judy, I am so happy that you enjoyed this piece. You are so right that we have neglected our veterans. I have a grandson in the military and I pray that he will not be treated this way.Thank you so much for your kind visit and comments. Kika
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September 16, 2014 at 2:49 PM
Excellent write, Kika! What a great tribute to our unsung heroes! Bravo! Pandita
Ayala Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 4:28 PM
I am glad you liked this one! Thank you so much! Kika
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