Unspoken Thoughts

Will I wakeup from this pain,
will this be my last breath?
As I close my eyes the light 
begins to fade into darkness
and my failures flash before me.
As I lay in agony and sadness,
were you even aware of my shattered heart?
Or were you just to blind to notice what was 
staring you in the face the whole time?
Will the guilt of not speaking up or 
not being there when I needed you the most
come rushing over you when you realize I am no longer 
there?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Munoz Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 5:36 AM
Very deep mama. Applauds.
A  Avatar
October 23, 2013 at 1:05 PM
Lisa, :) Enjoyed your free verse win.......... Love ~ SKAT ~
Britt Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 10:00 AM
Pain is so present and believable in your poem. I think it would make great lyrics for an Evanescence song. Great job! CTB
Mehta Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 10:25 PM
Congrats on the win in the contest, lisa
Mccall Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 11:02 AM
Ty and congrats to u as well
A   Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 9:14 PM
Lisa, , CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "FREE VERSE" contest <----- Had fun reading your WIN!! If you'd like:-) Enjoy my latest blog! "THE FOOL" :) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=17055&PoetID=18720 xoxox-------take care & enjoy your coming week. <3 Linda <3
Mccall Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 10:18 PM
Ty and I will check ur blog out. U have a good week as.well. Xox
Adams Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 8:39 PM
sometimes someone must lose another to realize the gem they held...poignant piece, one can feel the pain...hugs
Davis Avatar
October 12, 2013 at 12:12 AM
This is a deep and powerful write You took the reader on an emotional roller coaster. Nice job
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