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Unspoken Goodbyes

I still remember the first time I saw you, How your smile felt so warm and new. I remember the first time we talked, And how my heart raced as we walked. I remember waiting just to see your face, Catching glimpses from a secret place. Staying up all night thinking of you, And waiting all day just to hear from you. I remember laughing together with ease, And crying alone when my heart wouldn’t please. Telling you stories, sharing my dreams, And holding back feelings bursting at the seams. I remember your eyes, your smile so bright, And your voice that made everything feel right. I think of you every single day, Even when I try to forget you in every way. Every moment with you is stuck in my mind, Though you’re not here and I’m left behind. But even with the pain of losing you, I’m grateful for the love we knew.

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Date: 4/6/2025 4:27:00 AM
Dear PZ, How heartfelt and sincere and beautifully youv expressed eternal love that never fades amidst time and distance and what may have broken the relationship apart, so touching and the ending made my soul stir, as those words hit deep really! Soulfully moving and such a flawless poem! Thank you for entering and for sharing this! Congratulations on your win! Sending you light
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Date: 4/6/2025 11:06:00 AM
Thank you so much for your beautiful words. I'm truly touched that the poem resonated with you so deeply. Your message means more than I can say—grateful for your light and support!

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