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Unspoken Echoes of Unrequited Love

She Walks in, Beauty in motion, Bright as sunlight, Melting in that smile, Drowning in those eyes Falling, I might be, Thinking of no other, Waiting for the moment Longing that this is real, Despair that this is not, Doubting the possibility Waiting for a moment, Hoping this is true Pulse quickens, Sweat beading, Heart pounding Stomach in knots, it hurts, Hands shaking, Voice stumbles The words tumble from my dry mouth She turns red, covers her face And then she leaves, nothing added Oh, what did I do? What did I say? I apologise, she responds It's not clear and I can't see Well, what's said can't be unsaid Was I brave or a fool I know a truth She tried to spare my feelings Which made it worse. It could have been me, but not this time.

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Date: 10/20/2023 6:13:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts on unrequited love through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Mark Brown
Date: 10/21/2023 12:33:00 PM
Thank you for the warm welcome.

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