Unspoken Confession

UNSPOKEN CONFESSION


“Is there something you want to tell me?”
the words echoed violently in my ears.

I heard the grinding of the gears,
releasing the latches on the trap door
on which I was standing……

the machinations of interrogation -
and guilt - manifesting themselves,

increased eye blink rate,
uneasy scanning of the scene,
furtive attempts at indifference.

“Is there something you want to tell me!!”
the words the same, the tone different,

more insistent in its knowingness
less tolerant of the stinging silence
no plea bargain offered.

I stood there – crayons in hand –
my colorful new friends
standing behind me - backs to the wall.


John G. Lawless
6/27/2015

submitted to – Is There Something You Want to tell me – poetry contest
sponsor – Judy Konos

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/6/2015 8:23:00 PM
John, Congratulations on your win, SKAT love
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Date: 7/6/2015 12:02:00 AM
Cute! congrats !
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Date: 7/5/2015 10:37:00 PM
Congrats on ur winning write John!
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Date: 7/5/2015 9:15:00 PM
John Congrats on your win. LINDA
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John Lawless
Date: 7/5/2015 9:19:00 PM
thanks Linda.
Date: 7/5/2015 9:06:00 AM
Thank You for entering my contest.
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John Lawless
Date: 7/5/2015 9:18:00 PM
A pleasure Judy and thanks for sponsoring this very interesting contest theme.
Date: 6/27/2015 7:17:00 PM
Loved this! Very cute :)
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John Lawless
Date: 6/27/2015 8:01:00 PM
Yup, those are words that usually dumbfound the children...
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