Unspoken

You take my breath away as usual,
Always aware of the little unspoken words.
Unspoken thoughts. 
As if you didn't know I could hear them,
Transparencies of subliminal messages.
So deep, so hard core,
I wish you could see what I what I already do!
You complete me, Just as important as peripheral vision is to sight,
you are to my soul!
Our connection is beyond all that you see,
Much more than the perfect sunset.
Giving in is never like giving up,
It is more like letting go.
Accepting all things as they are,
knowing that
They are what they are, 
and that where we are is where we are supposed to be.
TOGETHER
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Delacroix Avatar
September 26, 2009 at 8:20 PM
Nice poem, well written and expressed. Thank you for sharing. Caroline.
Mchugh Avatar
September 25, 2009 at 11:05 PM
Beautiful.
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