Mary Murphy Poet Other

Unspoken

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                  /(({~~}))\
            /{{  \(( \@/))/  }}\
    ..^_^..    \(({~~}))/ 
(({{{@}}}))      %                                   Roses say a lot,
                                                  Both in scent and how they look,

     ..””””..         <{{(((@)))}}>                Admire all of her
              \      /  ~~~~~~~~
                &                  %
                  \                />
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                     \          /
                       &     /
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Sara Kendrick August 30, 2025 at 3:55 AM Creative winning work. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K Mary Murphy September 2, 2025 at 6:54 AM I love how your illusku illustration has movement. I also like how gutsy you are to tell people how to read it from the beginning. It is such a creative way to to incorporate the text of the poem into the shape of the kite. Congratulations on your win, too.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 28, 2025 at 10:21 AM - So true, Mary... roses don't need words... creative illustration :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs Mary Murphy September 2, 2025 at 6:49 AM I love that your illusku illustration mimics an actual adorable animal. Love the bug eyes being represented. Congrats on your win in the contest, too.