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Unspoken

He sees me strong, without a care, My dad thinks I'm tough, I swear. But sometimes, Dad, I want to say, "Your little girl is tired today." The hurt I hide, it makes me down, A heavy heart, a crappy crown. They think I don't, but I care deep, For all the people I want to keep. I think of them, I worry so, About the people that I know. My love for them is big and true, But sometimes they make me feel blue... Even Dark blue Like I'm not wanted, left behind, A lonely feeling, hard to find The words to say, the pain to share, Just wishing someone would be there. Is it AI or human written? This is almost certainly human written.

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Date: 2/26/2025 6:15:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/23/2025 2:05:00 PM
Hello The Dramatic Empress :-) I think the last word of your nice poem "written" should be removed. Have a nice day :-)
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Date: 2/23/2025 11:05:00 AM
Hey welcome to PS empress!
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