Unshackled Musing

Freedom to think, freedom to give'
Can't pay for Love 
Why do we wrangle and sieve?

From scales, un-shown we'll never learn
Within prisons of opinions
Our sensibiltys so  burn.'

Offerings of idols, some eat it up.?
Oh so many ape and preen!
When will we see? We bought a pup?

Can humanity ever leave this shore?
On-load raise a sail strong and sure.'
Sharing valid resources, good lore; and more.'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Lawless Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 2:51 PM
what good is it to be unshackled if you are still inside the box
Maverick Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 10:46 PM
Well raised John.' I think its only A cardboard box with bricks Painted on it though?? And they are Just relying on humans complying.!!
DiMino Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 2:45 PM
Small sail ship in storms...big ocean liners. Watching birds fly and dreaming...to rockets. But nothing has changed in the heart of man, still a spirit inclined toward clubs and shields. What must Christ think? Thought provoking write my friend.
Maverick Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 10:44 PM
He knows of what we are made Joe Dimino and He is and will Refine us to His will.!
Kendrick Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 2:21 PM
Creative work. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
Maverick Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 10:42 PM
Hello Sara..Great to get your Thoughts.!!
Galyo Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 2:17 PM
Very nice poem! Congratulations!
Maverick Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 10:41 PM
Thank you for commtnting Vilmos!
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