Unsettled Autumn

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Just writing some while waiting for PT and getting moist heat to relax muscles so that I can get stretches..

Autumn has begun unsettled That season with fickled weather Not it alone three others meddled In it though I find great pleasure Coolness turning of autumn leaves Fancy ballgowns for deciduous trees Just for fun! Check out "About This Poem"

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Robert Johnson

Date: 10/2/2011 7:24:00 AM

It's true, each season depends on the other. When their time is up, run for cover. To hide in the next. The world gets perplexed. When the seasons act like one another.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/1/2011 9:15:00 PM

Ah Sara, that last line is so lovely and descriptive. A special verse to read!

Kash Poet

Date: 10/1/2011 3:26:00 PM

Nice write here Sara on Autumn.Enjoyed.

Don Johnson

Date: 9/30/2011 6:37:00 PM

3 others summer winter spring, meddle n the seasons bring, mostimes thing, lovely poem babe, Don