Mohamed Adel Poet Rhyme

Unsent Letter

I like your long wavy hair
Brown it is better than fair
I like your pretty eyes in green 
They’re the purest I have ever seen

Or maybe they are hazel?
Beautiful but still as sharp as a razor!
(And don’t worry about being short
Because men like girls of the sort!)

Your glasses are nice and perfectly fit
It is a pleasure to me that we both met
Two colleagues among friends who are many
Trying to gain knowledge but not getting any!

Your smile makes my eyes hurt 
That’s the truth, I don’t mean to flirt
Please excuse me for writing about your beauty 
But somebody has to, it’s an urgent duty!

Because this kind of perfection must…..
Pass to the next generation
Who wouldn’t have this perfection…..
In even imagination 
They will never believe that….
A girl like you had ever been
Because like your beauty they will…
Never have seen 

Your charm, miss, is beyond any measure
So everybody should know to have the pleasure
(If this poem is good, it’s because of you
Because I made no effort, I just described you!)

I’m writing this poem about you and….
Asking for permission
And hope not to be misunderstood….
And above suspicion 

Because this poem wasn’t meant….
To be a work of heart
It was only meant to be a work of art

I can’t honestly say if this poem …..
Depicts the real glamor of you
But only God can do that….
I just tried to!

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Poet Destroyer A July 24, 2015 at 6:00 PM Mohamed. Congratulations on your XOOL flirting poetic win. Love LINDA" Mohamed Adel July 25, 2015 at 3:28 AM Thank you,Linda, so much for your constant support :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 22, 2015 at 2:36 AM Superb write Mohamed, congrats on ur much deserved win! Mohamed Adel July 22, 2015 at 5:37 AM Thank you,Dr.Upma, so much :)

Lee Carter July 21, 2015 at 7:48 AM Love your letter... Great write congrats on your win! Mohamed Adel July 21, 2015 at 12:49 PM Thank you,Lee, so much and very happy you liked it :)

Sizwe Hlabisa July 21, 2015 at 2:05 AM Congrats man, a letter that can seduce. I'll let you write my letters from now on Mohamed Adel July 21, 2015 at 12:47 PM hhhhhhhhh Thank you,Sizwe, so much and so glad you liked it :)

Viv Wigley July 20, 2015 at 8:36 PM Don't waste that letter, Mohamed, go buy a stamp. great flirt, congratulations. Regards, Viv Mohamed Adel July 21, 2015 at 12:45 PM Thank you,Viv, so much for stopping by and I'll try to do my best :)

Thabang Ngoma July 20, 2015 at 3:26 PM Hi Mohamed...I enjoyed every word, every line of this winning letter / poem "7"...you're an amazing 'heartist'! I'm flirted...(:heers, Tbang Mohamed Adel July 20, 2015 at 4:31 PM Thank you,Thabang, so much and very glad you liked it :)

Skat A July 20, 2015 at 2:32 PM Once again, it's nice to see this one a winning list. Mohamed, congratulations on your flirtatious win. SKAT LOVE Mohamed Adel July 20, 2015 at 4:29 PM Thank you,Skat, so much for the constant support :)

Jan Allison July 20, 2015 at 2:06 PM oh I hope you send the poem to her one day - great write for the contest - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Mohamed Adel July 20, 2015 at 4:28 PM Thank you,Jan, so much and i hope so :)

Eve Roper July 20, 2015 at 2:01 PM Mohamed, congratulations you on your win a 7 . Hugs Eve Mohamed Adel July 20, 2015 at 4:27 PM Thank you,Eve, so much :)

Casarah Nance July 20, 2015 at 1:47 PM Sweet write, nicely done :) Mohamed Adel July 20, 2015 at 4:26 PM Thank you,Casarah, so much :)

Poet Destroyer A July 5, 2015 at 3:21 AM Mohamed, congratulations. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Mohamed Adel July 5, 2015 at 5:01 PM Thank you,Linda, so much for your most kind words and support :)

Skat A July 4, 2015 at 7:48 PM Mohamed :) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. LOVE SKAT :) Mohamed Adel July 4, 2015 at 11:44 PM Thank you, Skat, so much and all the pleasure is mine :)

Jerry T Curtis July 3, 2015 at 5:46 PM Beautifully written Mohamed, There is no reason to resist what comes from the heart.I have to agree with Arthur Mohamed Adel July 3, 2015 at 7:11 PM Thank you, Jerry, so much for commenting, yeah i also think so but it's complicated, but I'm still giving it thought and i hope i figure it out

Arthur Vaso June 28, 2015 at 7:11 PM If I where you Mohamed, I would send that letter! This letter could capture the heart of any women you sent it too!!! Mohamed Adel June 28, 2015 at 7:41 PM Thank you, Arthur, so much for your most kind words, i really appreciate your opinion ,and i have been giving it thought and i hope i send it someday :)