Unseen Pain

Beautiful sunset The night feels the unseen pain Hidden by daylight.

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James Fraser

Date: 9/11/2009 2:30:00 PM

Intellectual write Abe, nice one>>James

Anna Kittrell

Date: 12/17/2008 10:15:00 AM

So true we are more volnerable at night.

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/3/2008 9:24:00 PM

This is a powerful write, we never think about what's bothering during the day, but at night we toss and turn in bed. Lovely Haiku...Raul

Michael Torres

Date: 11/17/2008 10:58:00 PM

Abe I love this. It so true. Why do we suffer more during the night then the day. Maybe we stay more active during the day. Great point and thought made here. I want to thank you Abe for your kind word's on Raul Moreno's poem about myself. Your word's meant a lot to me. I will try to read all of your poem's and comment. I really love this one it's a great observation you made very clever. God bless you and your's Abe. Michael Torres