Unseen Pain

Beautiful sunset
The night feels the unseen pain
Hidden by daylight.

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James Fraser

September 11, 2009 at 2:30 PM

Intellectual write Abe, nice one>>James

Anna Kittrell

December 17, 2008 at 10:15 AM

So true we are more volnerable at night.

Raul Moreno

December 3, 2008 at 9:24 PM

This is a powerful write, we never think about what's bothering during the day, but at night we toss and turn in bed. Lovely Haiku...Raul

Michael Torres

November 17, 2008 at 10:58 PM

Abe I love this. It so true. Why do we suffer more during the night then the day. Maybe we stay more active during the day. Great point and thought made here. I want to thank you Abe for your kind word's on Raul Moreno's poem about myself. Your word's meant a lot to me. I will try to read all of your poem's and comment. I really love this one it's a great observation you made very clever. God bless you and your's Abe. Michael Torres

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