Unseen Love

Love unseen 
   
 A sleek body arose from the bath
foam fondled her thighs
and the triangle of life.
The fire in the hearse hissed
painted her body with the fire of lust,
only the window saw her body´s hunger.
A pail of frost slowly dissolves
an ember of love lends warms to the night.
Tender is her longings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Rees Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 3:50 AM
Mmm. Read and re-read and enjoyed. Very descriptive and beautifully worded. Not sure about the hearse - should it be hearth ?
Turner Avatar
May 1, 2021 at 1:52 PM
You had my attention with the first line, Jan. Pretty racy stuff for an old man like me:)
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