Unseen Beauty (Haiku Series)

I've never seen Her                  She refreshes me                      Imperceptible
Even with the trees waving:        I see naught when she is here   Unseen to the naked eye
Rippling the waters                    On hot afternoons                     Waltzing among us

When the Eagles soar                 Helps the Honeybee              The Unseen Beauty
She is there to help guide them   Pollinating the Flowers           Is all around;for SHE is
Enhancing their flight                  With her unseen Breath         The Zephyrus Wind

Entered in Deborah Guzzi Contest The Beauty Way
Entered in Christie Moses Contest The Many Voices Of The Wind
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Breidenthal Avatar
February 8, 2012 at 6:28 PM
Excellent set of haikus filled with dreamy imagery. Always, Laura
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 6:29 PM
so how did you do in this contest. I bet you got top honors. Lovely imagery on Zephyr!
Riley Avatar
January 27, 2009 at 3:56 PM
True to form, about Nature, the "she " is Nature, or if the "she is human then it would be Synru. Beautiful pictures painted. Thanks for sharing. Judy Riley
Jordan Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 8:10 AM
HGarvey - Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in Debbie’s contest – God Bless, MJ
Winter Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 3:38 PM
Congratulations dear, sweet brother on your well deserved success in the Beauty Way contest! It is no surprise to me at all, as your are one amazing poet! I am so behind today on my comments, but I had to write to congratulate you and to thank you for your kind and thoughtful comments. I will catch up with your others soon. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
Richards Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 7:06 AM
Excellent and creative form of poetry! Well done and well deserved to win. Congratulations!K ~Carrie
Fawcett Avatar
January 9, 2009 at 12:14 AM
HG, congratulations on your well deserved Win in Debbie's inspiring contest. Best wishes, Nigel
Strand Avatar
January 8, 2009 at 11:51 PM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest HG.Rgds Brian
Neal Avatar
December 28, 2008 at 3:25 AM
Nice haiku series, thanks for commenting on my work.
Richards Avatar
December 23, 2008 at 8:23 AM
Excellent...using multiple haiku in this beautiful way! ~ Great job!! Love, Carrie
Winter Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 7:25 PM
Absolutely each one is beauty. Too Wonderful! Love, Shar
Gorelick Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 1:45 PM
This is just terrific, good luck in the contests. See, you are not a h-a poet. BG Xliamp
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