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Unseen

Ah! But to be unnoticed But to be in the shadows of life's living day by day To be the veiled spectator of a father cutting grass and a child in the sandbox- To witness these normal things normal people do on a normal day is pure ecstasy to one who glides past all like an unseen wind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/22/2012 12:33:00 PM
the great mystery of the self, passing in watching, alluded in 3 stanzas, well done!
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Date: 9/11/2012 6:01:00 PM
Sometimes it can be a true joy just to watch. WHERE and HOW are you? Light & Love
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Date: 7/3/2012 6:10:00 AM
an in depth view Awesome Amy of the inner self.. to be unsewen.. a fly on the wall..a face in the crowd.. introspecxtive write my friend.. how have u been luv?
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Date: 6/25/2012 12:27:00 AM
Its written so well.Unseen like the wind,Beautiful
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Date: 6/24/2012 7:50:00 PM
A lonely sounding poem. Also a prayer to be noticed by one who is shy. Thanks for sharing.
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