Unseasonable

UNSEASONABLE walking in warm Fall leaves pitter patter of raindrops ~ opening blossoms 11/8/2017

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/8/2017 8:40:00 PM

Excellent hakiu, Kim! Hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2017 8:47:00 PM

Thanks, my friend! Hugs!

Maria Williams

Date: 11/8/2017 6:15:00 PM

Nicely depicted Kim, a synergy of nature. I can feel myself 'wading' through the leaves, hearing the raindrops and seeing them 'pearl' on the blossoms...Maria xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2017 8:28:00 PM

Thanks Maria!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2017 3:10:00 PM

this is really lovely, Kim! (and I just looked down and saw Silent One said the same thing!!)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2017 6:14:00 PM

Thank you Andrea! :)

Silent One

Date: 11/8/2017 2:28:00 PM

This is lovely Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2017 6:14:00 PM

Thank you Silent! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/8/2017 6:54:00 AM

A beautiful poem to start the day--imagery well depicted in so few words!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2017 1:34:00 PM

Thanks, Vijay! Hope you’re having a blessed day! :)