Unseasonable

UNSEASONABLE

walking in warm Fall leaves
pitter patter of raindrops ~
opening blossoms

11/8/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 8:40 PM
Excellent hakiu, Kim! Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 8:47 PM
Thanks, my friend! Hugs!
Williams Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 6:15 PM
Nicely depicted Kim, a synergy of nature. I can feel myself 'wading' through the leaves, hearing the raindrops and seeing them 'pearl' on the blossoms...Maria xx
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 8:28 PM
Thanks Maria!
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 3:10 PM
this is really lovely, Kim! (and I just looked down and saw Silent One said the same thing!!)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 6:14 PM
Thank you Andrea! :)
One Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 2:28 PM
This is lovely Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 6:14 PM
Thank you Silent! :)
Pandit Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 6:54 AM
A beautiful poem to start the day--imagery well depicted in so few words!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 1:34 PM
Thanks, Vijay! Hope you’re having a blessed day! :)
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