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Unsayable

Unsayable my love for you, I have to hold it in Were I to say the words out loud, then that would be a sin You belong to another, and you never can be mine Even though you are so perfect and most certainly divine Unsayable the thoughts I think, unsayable the dreams Where you and I are well immersed in passion's flowing streams Unsayable it will remain, though in my mind we speak I'll bear this love inside my heart until I'm old and weak. And then if you are still around, and if you're finally free Unsayable will find a voice and speak for you and me. Inspired by Nette's Contest Theme

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Paige Hind

Date: 8/7/2024 2:57:00 PM

Great flow- beautiful couplets

Pat Adams

Date: 1/29/2018 5:30:00 PM

Very nice. Very well put. I once had an affair a long time ago. Her daddy had money and liked her husband, even though her husband beat her black and blue. She chose the fear of being dropped by her dad over being with me. I was crushed but now years later I'm with the love of my life!........life goes on. Wonderful pen! Another FAV for me........pat

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/29/2018 9:50:00 PM

Thanks for the visit. So sorry that you had your heart broken, but happy that you have found true love. Sometimes people stay in abusive relationships because it's just it's just easier than making a life change...even though it would be for their good.

Abosede Ogundare

Date: 1/28/2018 3:12:00 PM

This is beautiful!

Poet Tacito

Date: 1/25/2018 12:49:00 PM

Speechless. Telling love how it can be, if only...if only.

FJ Thomas

Date: 12/14/2017 10:54:00 AM

Oh my how beautiful; unsayably even ;)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/14/2017 11:38:00 AM

Yes, quite unsayable, as the prompt indicated. I'm glad you liked it.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/10/2017 10:14:00 AM

Thanks for the visit Eileen. Blessings to you on this Sunday and for the upcoming week. Hugs Rick.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 12/14/2017 11:38:00 AM

Thank you, dear. I appreciate it. I'm going to miss my brother. I would have sent you a little something, but I'm unable to get to his place before he leaves. I hope he gets to pass by. Hugs

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/10/2017 4:56:00 AM

Now that you said it and the cat is out of the bag...excellent write my friend...too bad you didn't enter it...I'll give you a win anyway lol...god bless and happy holidays Eileen...^WW^

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/7/2017 8:37:00 AM

Hi Eileen, I hope you are having a great day.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/5/2017 5:00:00 PM

This is understandable, Eileen. Some words are best left unsaid, even though they are dying to be set free! I heard of 2 people who lived for many years in such a sad situation...finally they got married after their respective spouses died. ~ Hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/27/2017 7:03:00 PM

This is well expressed Eileen. It is dangerous for people to express these types of feelings. Many relationship have been dashed on Rock of passion.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/28/2017 3:28:00 PM

Yes, dear Richard. It was inspired by Nette's prompt. I didn't join the contest because I didn't read the instructions in time. It has to be free verse. Well, at least I got a poem out of it.

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 11/25/2017 6:39:00 AM

Great job and heart rendering Eileen

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/28/2017 3:28:00 PM

Thank you, Jerry. A love buried is a burning fire.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 11/23/2017 11:38:00 PM

Great ending! I relate to this and I love how you spelled it out and delivered it. (I've been 7 months gone and missed reading you.) Hugs ... CayCay

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/28/2017 3:30:00 PM

Thanks, sweet CayCay. I'm SO glad that you are back. Where have you been hiding, dear. It doesn't matter. What matters is that you are back home. Hugs