Unsaid Prayer

Motionless it hangs 
in the air,

quiet echo of an unsaid 
prayer,

hazy halo of a droplet 
of rain,

dew caught in finest 
mesh

of a freshly woven 
silken web 

there among the moist, 
merry twigs!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 30, 2009 at 7:54 PM
Exceptional imagery and word choices... BRAVO Romeo! Best wishes, Keith
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