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Though scattered, focus on short tasks. Pro-actively, with respect, and QUIET way. If you're depressed, these are your circumstances. There is nothing to gaze to if you exhausted the try. Foray to unwind or do something pleasing for love. After a calamity, the promise of reward vanish. Shove a less irritable person to obtain a reprieve. Will would enhance humanity if we were not clannish. Rather than fretting, attempt to CALM down. When one is TRANQUIL, he accepts equanimity. It would assist if you highlighted your frown. Intending of enjoying love, allow no anonymity. Toughness is crucial for being relentless. I'll repeat it spread your seeds of hope. Humans spirit is shown in their PEACEFUL confession. Soon, dreams of passion will inspire the elope. It can be joyous or stressful, based on your trends. When the only option is immediate, decisive action It may stem from a need or be the result of intends When a storm is raging, a regal deal of interaction Arouse your mind to still not to embalm All evolves with time, including oneself Your skills assist you in ensuring your calm Despite the environment, balance yourself It feels delicious to remove things off your chest According to one's criteria of estimation. let them bear the burden and relish the benefit Indeed, each individual nails the same evaluation Many people who survived an incident whisper When you're idle, your thoughts seem inactive Possibilities for conflict render you relatively weaker At first glance, it appears to be an admirable captive. You are aware of SERENE and stop embracing her. Do you STILL seem sore, or are you faking stress? I hope you satisfied her and dabbed away her tear. His ethical dilemma makes a different excess. 4th place contest win Written: May 12, 2021 Writing Prompt - Calm - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 5/25/2021 4:26:00 AM
Las, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Calm-Challenge with your poem and pics, peace _Constance
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Date: 5/25/2021 9:13:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Constance, for your consideration, perusing, and arrangement, ideally, won't ever miss any of your extraordinary contests
Date: 5/22/2021 10:25:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/25/2021 9:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Alex
Date: 5/13/2021 2:24:00 AM
Heya Lasaad I have enjoyed reading this poem, of wisdom that only comes with life experience, the rhyme form is excellent also you have seamlessly incorporated the all the prompts, only the capitals give a hint of them, big contender in the contest, cheers David
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Date: 5/13/2021 3:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, dearest David; you can't realize how well performed a task until it is appropriately assessed by someone who can enhance or complement it; your kind words are very encouraging to me.// Regards Lasaad
Date: 5/12/2021 11:27:00 PM
A pleasure to read your effort for the contest and hope it will be judged high. You used the words perfectly.
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Date: 5/13/2021 3:25:00 AM
Thanks, dear friend Victor, I appreciate your reading and kind words, have a great day, regards
Date: 5/12/2021 10:32:00 PM
Very nicely done, Lasaad. THe theme of this challenge very much inspired you.
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Date: 5/13/2021 3:29:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea, It's nice to know that whenever I put my job in the hands of such a brilliant poet, I hope it gets placed high. Best regards
Date: 5/12/2021 9:29:00 PM
People who are naturally laid back are so lucky. Calmness is much easier for them. A nicely rhymed, gorgeous poem, Lasaad. Best of wishes for the contest, Evelyn
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Date: 5/13/2021 3:31:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words, dear Evelyn; I appreciate your visit and great feedback, best regards.
Date: 5/12/2021 3:56:00 PM
Creative work that you have penned. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Some people are born with a calm nature and others more high strung. If a person is high strung, it takes a lot of work just to be a little calm. Thanks for your visit to my page. Right this minute I am feeling some better. Thanks for your concern. Sara
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Date: 5/12/2021 6:09:00 PM
I’m happy that you feel better I hope all the petrysoup activities will help heal, have a wonderful evening and feel goo

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