Unripe
Down by the tempest
wild panacea grabs your attention
In places yet explored
with eyes half open
we gasp for air
I have heard your half hearted pray
But what is right ?
when the remedy is unrequited love
carry the weight of freedom
but be aware of the snakes
in the grass
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