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Written: December 11, 2023 _________________________________________ Intricate depiction of a being? That a single hand could create Beneficial matters can be evanescent When built out of yielding clay? Molded into fiction, scales, and tails In terms of creative process, Ground and airborne entities Morph into unthought-of shapes. A refined intellect creates ephemera Quickly under a gentle moonlight I'm floating in the swaying elevator Regarding heavenly breezes. Hair converts into poet-trees from poetry Yet untamed ideas are captivated With the spirals and knuckles Brilliant sculptor's vision and decision. lifting our minds into untamed sight Those who grasp this routine are lucky And the beholders of moonbeam dreams Pursue the path that moves the heart.

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Jay Narain

Date: 12/12/2023 10:45:00 AM

Nice poem. Well penned.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/12/2023 8:49:00 AM

Wow, this is such an evocative and philosophically deep poem conveying so many emotions within its profound meanings. I'm in absolute awe of your artistic wordplay, once again..Dear Sotto, the way you've weave words in such an enchanting way that holds so much wisdom, ahh, it absolutely deserves all accolades."Hair converts into poet-trees from poetry","beholders of moonbeam dreams","A refined intellect creates ephemera" It depends on the intellect and perspective of intricacies a heart can knit

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/12/2023 5:35:00 AM

And the beholders of moonbeam dreams Pursue the path that moves the heart--awesome ending to your poem, my friend

Ink Empress

Date: 12/12/2023 5:08:00 AM

Ah dr sotto as always a very captivating and creative write this is. I love the way you’ve played around with words to deliver such a profound and meaningful poem that so many would ponder on. I especially love the lines “ Hair converts into poet-trees from poetry Yet untamed ideas are captivate With the spirals and knuckles” poet-trees something I’ve never seen before, anywhere. A clever way of depicting your thoughts. The ending is impeccable too: absolute pleasure reading this:

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/12/2023 2:13:00 AM

Quite an interesting poem. I liked how artistic creation floated next to the happiness of ambitions.. it leaves me feeling at rest.

Judy Ball

Date: 12/12/2023 1:48:00 AM

Nicely done my friend. Only God can create life where there is nothing, beauty from emptiness. Loved this. God Bless, JB

Mat Ignacio

Date: 12/11/2023 7:27:00 PM

'with spirals and knuckles' - a great line within an even greater unfolding of thought - nicely conveyed here