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Written: December 11, 2023
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Intricate depiction of a being?
         That a single hand could create
         Beneficial matters can be evanescent
         When built out of yielding clay?

Molded into fiction, scales, and tails 
         In terms of creative process,
         Ground and airborne entities
         Morph into unthought-of shapes.

A refined intellect creates ephemera
        Quickly under a gentle moonlight
        I'm floating in the swaying elevator
        Regarding heavenly breezes.

Hair converts into poet-trees from poetry
       Yet untamed ideas are captivated
       With the spirals and knuckles
       Brilliant sculptor's vision and decision.

lifting our minds into untamed sight
       Those who grasp this routine are lucky
       And the beholders of moonbeam dreams
       Pursue the path that moves the heart.

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Jay Narain

Date: 12/12/2023 10:45:00 AM

Nice poem. Well penned.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/12/2023 8:49:00 AM

Wow, this is such an evocative and philosophically deep poem conveying so many emotions within its profound meanings. I'm in absolute awe of your artistic wordplay, once again..Dear Sotto, the way you've weave words in such an enchanting way that holds so much wisdom, ahh, it absolutely deserves all accolades."Hair converts into poet-trees from poetry","beholders of moonbeam dreams","A refined intellect creates ephemera" It depends on the intellect and perspective of intricacies a heart can knit

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/12/2023 5:35:00 AM

And the beholders of moonbeam dreams Pursue the path that moves the heart--awesome ending to your poem, my friend

Ink Empress

Date: 12/12/2023 5:08:00 AM

Ah dr sotto as always a very captivating and creative write this is. I love the way you’ve played around with words to deliver such a profound and meaningful poem that so many would ponder on. I especially love the lines “ Hair converts into poet-trees from poetry Yet untamed ideas are captivate With the spirals and knuckles” poet-trees something I’ve never seen before, anywhere. A clever way of depicting your thoughts. The ending is impeccable too: absolute pleasure reading this: