Unresolved Thought Trains


how may the dreamed object
awake within the dream
if subject be asleep

02-September-2021

dreammusefree verse

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Victor Buhagiar

September 3, 2021 at 2:10 AM

It happens occasionally. You won't wake from the dream.

CayCay Godwin

September 2, 2021 at 4:13 PM

I had to read at least one more of your poems and oh, boy howdy did your words make me cross-eyed. Your write inspires a depth of thought that totally stimulates one's spiritual dimensions. I leave here not knowing what I think of your poem because it's depth left me dizzy (that's a compliment). Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Unseeking Seeker

September 2, 2021 at 6:50 PM

Hahaha! Well, when we sleep, we are the subject and all the dream images are the objects. Likewise, if we are one of the differentiated objects in this dream world, manifested by ourself as subject, the question is ‘how to awake, within the dream’?

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