Unresolved Thought Trains

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how may the dreamed object awake within the dream if subject be asleep 02-September-2021

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/3/2021 2:10:00 AM

It happens occasionally. You won't wake from the dream.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 9/2/2021 4:13:00 PM

I had to read at least one more of your poems and oh, boy howdy did your words make me cross-eyed. Your write inspires a depth of thought that totally stimulates one's spiritual dimensions. I leave here not knowing what I think of your poem because it's depth left me dizzy (that's a compliment). Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 9/2/2021 6:50:00 PM

Hahaha! Well, when we sleep, we are the subject and all the dream images are the objects. Likewise, if we are one of the differentiated objects in this dream world, manifested by ourself as subject, the question is ‘how to awake, within the dream’?