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Unrequited Summer

Contest Title: 'FAREWELL, SUMMER' Sponsor: nette onclaud Date: 05.09.2019 He grips so tightly to her warmth with fears that this will be their last encounter until God knows when - When will we reunite once more? He, lost in limerence - summer - She ran as fast as the leaves fell; now he walks amongst her ashes.

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Date: 12/1/2019 11:00:00 AM
Lovely poem, Victoria.
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Date: 10/9/2019 9:25:00 PM
Beautiful poem Victoria, what a wonderful word, limerence.
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Victoria Teo
Date: 10/20/2019 3:07:00 PM
Thanks James - It is a very wonderful indeed. :)
Date: 9/12/2019 5:20:00 PM
wow, what a touching one. Love it.
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Victoria Teo
Date: 9/12/2019 6:32:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thank you for your kind words :)
Date: 9/12/2019 1:11:00 PM
really touched, victoria.. a winner as i never give HMs.. i hope TPS can fix this... congrats and thanks for being part of my summer spree.. huggs
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Victoria Teo
Date: 9/12/2019 6:30:00 PM
Hi Nette, thanks for your message and for selecting my poem for the mention in this contest. Much appreciated :)
Date: 9/12/2019 12:39:00 PM
- Goodbye Summer .... and congratulations on your winning poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Victoria Teo
Date: 9/12/2019 6:29:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine Smile :)
Date: 9/12/2019 5:44:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest!;)
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Victoria Teo
Date: 9/12/2019 9:23:00 AM
Hi Brenda, thank you for your comment and congrats! :)
Date: 9/5/2019 11:44:00 PM
This is a sad yet beautiful piece.
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Victoria Teo
Date: 9/6/2019 1:39:00 AM
Hi Richard, thank you for your comment :)
Date: 9/5/2019 6:49:00 PM
Goodness, Victoria...very moving in few words, the reader imagines...jim
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Victoria Teo
Date: 9/6/2019 1:36:00 AM
Thank you Jim! :)

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