Unrequited Love's Last Chance

Ambiguity undefined
Overuled and underlined
by Blood red hair that hides
the ship that sunk in sea blue eyes

empty life and bursting heart
betrayed by senses in the dark
haunted by the righteous wrong
a strangled heart's silent song
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 7:29 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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January 28, 2016 at 11:30 AM
FREYJA, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love ** SKAT **
Fisher Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 12:32 PM
Many congrats on your piece being featured t his week. Rgds Janette
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 4:21 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Freyja. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 11:36 AM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured >> James
Freeman Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 9:10 AM
Excellent poem Freyja. Congratulations on your feature this week. Sincerely, Moses
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November 30, 2009 at 5:44 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
Fraser Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 1:23 PM
Nice write Freyja, a warm welcome to the Soup>>James
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 9:48 AM
Freyja, wonderful poem. Welcome to PoetrySoup and may we see many more poems written by you here. Love, Carol
Doggett Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 3:11 PM
Nice poem
Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 3:43 AM
Very good Couplet describing pain of love broken. Sara
Werner Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 3:43 AM
this is really good! keep on writing!
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