Unrequited Love

When you have given all.
Spent.
She gave her all,
But he still went.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 11:35 PM
LIke Sheol down here says, you put a lot of story into these few words. Well done.
Murphy Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 6:37 AM
Thank you. I suppose being at a loss for words is sometimes a good thing.
Moribund Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 7:18 PM
Great poem. You have encompassed the heart of the event in only 14 words, BRAVO!
Murphy Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 9:34 PM
Thank you for your kind words. In times like these, sometimes less is more.
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