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Unrequited Love

When you have given all. Spent. She gave her all, But he still went.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 7/16/2014 11:35:00 PM
LIke Sheol down here says, you put a lot of story into these few words. Well done.
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Joe Murphy
Date: 7/17/2014 6:37:00 AM
Thank you. I suppose being at a loss for words is sometimes a good thing.
Date: 7/16/2014 7:18:00 PM
Great poem. You have encompassed the heart of the event in only 14 words, BRAVO!
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Joe Murphy
Date: 7/16/2014 9:34:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. In times like these, sometimes less is more.