Unrequited Love

My love for you is an addiction, my devotion my noose
clinging to delusion makes me struggle for breath
to fill my aching lungs, I must cut my desire loose

Outwardly you love me, but it’s what’s inside that bears weight
my shameless attempts to woo you, stain a barren portrait 
my love for you is an addiction, my devotion my noose

I hunger for a love that is undeniably unrequited
suffocated by the harsh reality, shadows consume me 
to fill my aching lungs, I must cut my desire loose
my love for you is an addiction, my devotion my noose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 4/10/2012 1:39:00 PM
Diana-Marie, Congrats on your win with this wonderful piece. Love, Kim
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Date: 4/10/2012 7:13:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your well deserved placement in Brian's "Ten Lines" contest Diana. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/8/2012 12:42:00 AM
Beautifully worded love poem.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/7/2012 1:05:00 PM
I have only felt this a few times in life ...Love is painful at times and at my old age I have found that I create my own happiness..lol..your lines are so magical and I especially like the barren portrait and the gentle repetition...the tempo is also relaxing...Happy that this won, Dianna Marie. It is such a classy write! Have a blessed Easter weekend! :) Gwendolen
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Diana-Marie Bombardieri
Date: 4/7/2012 10:42:00 PM
thank you Gwendolen:) I love that you called it a classy write. I appreciate your comments. Have a happy Easter as well! Diana
Date: 1/24/2012 7:27:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments on my writings Diana-Marie. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/22/2012 12:20:00 PM
Beautiful Diana! Pleasant to reading it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/22/2012 11:55:00 AM
Diana-Marie, very good, I like it a lot, well done,nothing worse than unrequited love though, family competition, watch out Vie and the rest of us ha ha, hope you and Vie enter my next contest ..David
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Date: 1/22/2012 11:18:00 AM
an endearing and lovely write, a pleasure to read thank you for sharing,...p.d.
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