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UNREPENTANT SOUL

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 24 FEBRUARY 2017,  MY PHOTO,  ©

Unrepentant Soul

It is the unrepentant soul that excludes itself from heaven’s gardens of bliss, not God! 







© Demetrios Trifiatis
     24 February 2017

* Third Monoku of the trilogy!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Merryman Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 8:51 PM
Amen! This is so true, Demetrios! Great monoku. Blessings, Kim
Trifiatis Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 9:40 AM
Thank you dearest, Kim, for your precious visit and comment!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 4:02 PM
A beautiful wisdom Demetrios, your lines always fruitful and sublime xomo
Trifiatis Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 4:21 PM
Thank you so much for your gracious visit and comment my friend Maureen! Welcome!
Smith Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 2:08 PM
Truth flows from your pen today my dear friend.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 4:07 PM
You too kind my friend, Tim! Thank you!
Alhemaidy Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 1:03 PM
Man! Full Pithy & Wonderful!! A7
Trifiatis Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 4:06 PM
Thank you dear, Abdullah for your lovely comment!
Anish Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 12:29 PM
Stimulating thought here Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Trifiatis Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 4:05 PM
Peace & Blessing dear, Matthew! Thank you!
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 10:07 AM
Profound dear friend Hugs Eve
Trifiatis Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 4:05 PM
Thank you my friend, Eve! Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 8:58 AM
That is true. People do like to blame God.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 9:37 AM
Yes, my friend, Richard they do blame our Lord instead of themselves! Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 8:58 AM
- Three great poems posted today, dear Demetrios ... you write deeply and wisely ... words that get the reader to think a little longer than his nose - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 9:36 AM
Thank you for your good words my dear friend, Anne-Lise! You so kind! Hugs.
Green Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 6:51 AM
Now this one was the deepest one yet, such a profound question. Not sure I know the answer. But I have a question, how big is that rooftop garden of yours. You seem to have every variety of flower blooming there. Beautiful photos.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 9:42 AM
God been just and loving would never exclude anyone from the gardens of bliss unless they do not wish to enter and since we have Free Will then it is up to us to repent and enter or not to repent and stay outside! NOW the second question is easier my friend to answer. My garden is less than 50 square meters but I have a plethora of flowers which I love and care so they reward me and my friends, as yourself, with their beauty! Thank you!
Gupta Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 6:49 AM
Wonderful ...
Trifiatis Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 9:43 AM
Thank you my friend, Probir!
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