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UNREPENTANT SOUL

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 24 FEBRUARY 2017,  MY PHOTO,  ©

It is the unrepentant soul that excludes itself from heaven’s gardens of bliss, not God! 







© Demetrios Trifiatis
     24 February 2017

* Third Monoku of the trilogy!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/24/2017 8:51:00 PM
Amen! This is so true, Demetrios! Great monoku. Blessings, Kim
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Date: 2/25/2017 9:40:00 AM
Thank you dearest, Kim, for your precious visit and comment!
Date: 2/24/2017 4:02:00 PM
A beautiful wisdom Demetrios, your lines always fruitful and sublime xomo
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Date: 2/24/2017 4:21:00 PM
Thank you so much for your gracious visit and comment my friend Maureen! Welcome!
Date: 2/24/2017 2:08:00 PM
Truth flows from your pen today my dear friend.
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Date: 2/24/2017 4:07:00 PM
You too kind my friend, Tim! Thank you!
Date: 2/24/2017 1:03:00 PM
Man! Full Pithy & Wonderful!! A7
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Date: 2/24/2017 4:06:00 PM
Thank you dear, Abdullah for your lovely comment!
Date: 2/24/2017 12:29:00 PM
Stimulating thought here Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 2/24/2017 4:05:00 PM
Peace & Blessing dear, Matthew! Thank you!
Date: 2/24/2017 10:07:00 AM
Profound dear friend Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/24/2017 4:05:00 PM
Thank you my friend, Eve! Hugs
Date: 2/24/2017 8:58:00 AM
- Three great poems posted today, dear Demetrios ... you write deeply and wisely ... words that get the reader to think a little longer than his nose - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/24/2017 9:36:00 AM
Thank you for your good words my dear friend, Anne-Lise! You so kind! Hugs.
Date: 2/24/2017 8:58:00 AM
That is true. People do like to blame God.
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Date: 2/24/2017 9:37:00 AM
Yes, my friend, Richard they do blame our Lord instead of themselves! Thank you!
Date: 2/24/2017 6:51:00 AM
Now this one was the deepest one yet, such a profound question. Not sure I know the answer. But I have a question, how big is that rooftop garden of yours. You seem to have every variety of flower blooming there. Beautiful photos.
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Date: 2/24/2017 9:42:00 AM
God been just and loving would never exclude anyone from the gardens of bliss unless they do not wish to enter and since we have Free Will then it is up to us to repent and enter or not to repent and stay outside! NOW the second question is easier my friend to answer. My garden is less than 50 square meters but I have a plethora of flowers which I love and care so they reward me and my friends, as yourself, with their beauty! Thank you!
Date: 2/24/2017 6:49:00 AM
Wonderful ...
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Date: 2/24/2017 9:43:00 AM
Thank you my friend, Probir!
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