Unrepentant Miners

Unrepentant Miners


I look out over what should have been viridian fields
Where daisy and dandelions
Found their picturesque beauty
Wild and free

I felt the meadow of summer skies
Lay their heads beneath your bare feet
To kiss at your ankles with their secrets
Wild and free

I saw the written verses
Your laughter in April dales of rain
Beneath a willow tree you came to me
Wild and free

I heard you dance on dewdrops
From gentle hills to mountain heights
You pirouette in my eyes 
Pirate of my sighs
Wild and free


…………………..but the wealth of your heart
is a treasured prize
to another gluttonous search for gold
unrepentant miners gouge
excavate your beauty
to an open cast
terraces dug deeper than the scars

and though it hurts to see 
your dream piled like so much unwanted earth
still given time
in your own clouds of love
those bright yellow flowers
lift up the heads again

but still they search for the precious of you
they couldn’t see and never will
they claw at your soul
for riches they just can’t understand
and think a balm of shovelling it all back
you might grow again for them

they just don’t know that the dusty roads
have trampled you there

Wild and free

I touched the meads of winter skies
Lay their icicles beneath your feet
To kiss on your eyes with their secrets
Wild and free

I saw the unwritten pages
Your joy in the hidden streams
There beneath the willow tree when you came to me
Wild and free

And I watched you sing with lightning
From the echoed prowess of your storm
You dazzle in my eyes 
The sweet pirate of my sighs
Wild and free

…………………………..but to them your heart is a mine
open and cast with the scars
they are just too greedy to see
they think in the fields
where your treasures dwell
just iron and steel to build their world
and leave you a pit
to get on with your life
any way you can

I look out over your verdant fields
Where daisy and dandelions fall like gems
Found their prophetic serenity
Wild and free

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/12/2009 1:59:00 PM
Thanks Colin for stopping by. I'm trying : ). xoxo
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Date: 5/11/2009 6:48:00 PM
Another poem, that only with talent as yours ....could be so beautiful! it does burn the heart...Wow...
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Date: 5/11/2009 5:20:00 PM
How sad that people have been prospecting without good intentions on a woman who deserves love. You give us much to think about in the excellent poem, Colin! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/11/2009 2:27:00 PM
Look how much someone is missing out on. It's almost too much for the reader to bear. You must save her, and she must really see you. Incredible amazing burning straight to my heart poetry of poetry! Too beautiful, your heart to your words. Brilliant writer. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/11/2009 9:58:00 AM
Well, brother Colin she needs you to rescue her from this journey that her life has been on..she needs to feel loved and not used and abused by unwelcoming miners who just want to rest in the beauty until its time for them to move on...you have written a beauty....I am going to make a deal with the heavens that when I die and come back to be able to write like you....great stuff rasta man.
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Date: 5/11/2009 8:19:00 AM
Beautiful piece indeed....flowers, wild, free, serenity,....I love it Colin!
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