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Unremarkable Slumber

Softly she snoozes While the wide world whirls wildly Never noticing (fun with combining senryu and alliteration)

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2011 4:41:00 AM

What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Renee. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/17/2011 3:09:00 PM

cool and clever combo Renee.. great contest material luv..

Renee Kelly
Date: 7/17/2011 6:09:00 PM

Oh - is there a combo contest? I just sort of popped this one out. I've been having fun with senryus and thought I'd try a bit of alliteration with it :D

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/17/2011 12:10:00 PM

Very nice Renee... a quiet somber...always Michael

Renee Kelly
Date: 7/17/2011 6:09:00 PM

Thanks Michael!