Unreliable

If I was a reliable narrator?
Gave up all my inheritance from the space party. 
Maybe I would be a little less jolted. 
Give myself a chance to jump across flimsy lily pads. 

She held a frisbee in her hand. 
Tossed it like pencils, like when I screamed in class, threw my desk in slow motion. 
Yet still revolving around under the coldness. 
Like an ice sculpture in my head. 

She had honest, plentiful voices. 
She had a blank space where her tool box used to be. 
She tossed her inheritance like blobs of jelly.
I came to life in five ways, and they don’t believe me!

Maybe I need to take a break from the narration, sounds, and struggles. 
Narration, mumble, mumble. 
There’s something so honest about the voices. 
They stand up like they have feet, and want to toss a frisbee. 

My life is an inheritance of voices.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Delegans Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 8:56 AM
Such a great description of what our internal self goes through. I enjoyed reading your poem today. Nicely done, Angelica.
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December 26, 2025 at 3:33 AM
There is nearly always the solo chatter inside, - except when singing loudly, doing mental arithmetic, or running fast enough to puff to catch the bus. I really like your writing style with juxtaposed randomness - the space party, flimsy lily pads, tossing jelly blobs, and the metaphor of the frisbee (so long as they don't toss it at your head). Cool poem, but I feel it has a deeper meaning for you which might be uncomfortable. For me just reading it ,it has a joyful playful sense, yet with a subtle menace. J
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