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Unrelated To Anything

she tries not to appear COLDLY CYNICAL her posture is LOOSE and RECEPTIVE her body pitched PROGRESSIVELY FORWARD relaxation no movement at all but the HEAVE of her CHEST THE ULTIMATE RESISTANCE vivdictive maybe shes TOO rigid A PSYCHOLOGICAL SPECIMEN getting uncomfortable with her UNCONSCIENCE GRUMBLED WITH PLEASURE COMPLICATED TRUTH be known DISORGANIZED IN GENERAL EMBARRASSINGLY OBVIOUS DEDICATION REST PEACEFULLY

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Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/25/2009 12:04:00 PM

Love the title and love the honesty of the piece..strong words to give the reader a peek into the window of this life...good writing.

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/24/2009 10:47:00 AM

The PSYCHOLOGICAL SPECIMAN is profound and as her COLDLY CYNICAL side lies dormant perhaps superficial waiting for the right time to awake. The poem is compelling and certainly leaves a lot to ponder, excellent job...Raul

James Fraser

Date: 5/22/2009 4:33:00 PM

The sleeping beauty in dream mode as she breathes in like a gasp in a trance, as the demon specimen ponders? James

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/22/2009 1:31:00 PM

This is amazing! Beautiful flow sister!- jeremiah

Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 5/20/2009 6:07:00 PM

now this, this is profound! i feel like i have now been turned into this person, and this line " A PSYCHOLOGICAL SPECIMEN" was one of my favorites, you have such a way with your words and thoughts, the way you make a persons mind think! this character is truly unique and while she may only be on paper, she is real here, you have made her come to life. ..cont

Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 5/20/2009 6:07:00 PM

you as well keep me reading, your ideas, your words, they are so tantalizing! i am feasting my mind on your poetry. i am feasting my soul from the heart in your words. epic, beautiful and another fav to add for me! all my love madison