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she tries not to appear COLDLY CYNICAL

her posture is LOOSE and RECEPTIVE

her body pitched PROGRESSIVELY FORWARD

                                        relaxation
no movement at all but the HEAVE of her CHEST

                                THE ULTIMATE RESISTANCE
    vivdictive

maybe shes TOO rigid

                                   A PSYCHOLOGICAL SPECIMEN

getting uncomfortable with her UNCONSCIENCE

GRUMBLED WITH PLEASURE

COMPLICATED                             TRUTH be known

DISORGANIZED IN GENERAL
                                    EMBARRASSINGLY OBVIOUS
DEDICATION
                                    REST PEACEFULLY

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Christopher Higgins Date: 5/25/2009 12:04:00 PM Love the title and love the honesty of the piece..strong words to give the reader a peek into the window of this life...good writing. Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 5/24/2009 10:47:00 AM The PSYCHOLOGICAL SPECIMAN is profound and as her COLDLY CYNICAL side lies dormant perhaps superficial waiting for the right time to awake. The poem is compelling and certainly leaves a lot to ponder, excellent job...Raul Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 5/22/2009 4:33:00 PM The sleeping beauty in dream mode as she breathes in like a gasp in a trance, as the demon specimen ponders? James Login to Reply

Edward Orozco Date: 5/22/2009 1:31:00 PM This is amazing! Beautiful flow sister!- jeremiah Login to Reply

Rhia Madison Thomer Date: 5/20/2009 6:07:00 PM now this, this is profound! i feel like i have now been turned into this person, and this line " A PSYCHOLOGICAL SPECIMEN" was one of my favorites, you have such a way with your words and thoughts, the way you make a persons mind think! this character is truly unique and while she may only be on paper, she is real here, you have made her come to life. ..cont Login to Reply

Rhia Madison Thomer Date: 5/20/2009 6:07:00 PM you as well keep me reading, your ideas, your words, they are so tantalizing! i am feasting my mind on your poetry. i am feasting my soul from the heart in your words. epic, beautiful and another fav to add for me! all my love madison Login to Reply