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Unreachable Daydream

Judgement will await, A whim found of a young boy's Unreachable age. An urge to be grown, A truth lost of an old man's Unreachable youth. Rapture will await, A hope found of a flawed soul's Unreachable birth. ............................................ Poem Type: Senryu Series Contest: Second Chance - 4 Sponsored by: Broken Wings Placement: 9th Place Contest: Any Poem Written In April 2016 Sponsored by Laurie Loo

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Date: 6/9/2016 6:44:00 PM
very interesting haiku set, and I see you placed in the contest . BIG congrats.
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Jesse Day
Date: 8/5/2016 6:41:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 5/26/2016 1:53:00 PM
Great lines, wonderful flows, indicative of a soul deep mind. An excellent seven well deserved.
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Jesse Day
Date: 6/1/2016 11:45:00 PM
Thanks for your comments! - Jesse
Date: 4/26/2016 8:59:00 PM
A wonderfully rich collection. Strong imagery, nice write.
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Jesse Day
Date: 4/27/2016 8:48:00 AM
Thank you! Jesse

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