Unreachable Daydream

Judgement will await,
A whim found of a young boy's
Unreachable age.

An urge to be grown,
A truth lost of an old man's
Unreachable youth.

Rapture will await,
A hope found of a flawed soul's
Unreachable birth.

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Poem Type: Senryu Series
Contest: Second Chance - 4
Sponsored by: Broken Wings
Placement: 9th Place

Contest: Any Poem Written In April 2016
Sponsored by Laurie Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 6:44 PM
very interesting haiku set, and I see you placed in the contest . BIG congrats.
Day Avatar
August 5, 2016 at 6:41 AM
Thanks!
Makama Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 1:53 PM
Great lines, wonderful flows, indicative of a soul deep mind. An excellent seven well deserved.
Day Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 11:45 PM
Thanks for your comments! - Jesse
Gazbowski Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 8:59 PM
A wonderfully rich collection. Strong imagery, nice write.
Day Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Thank you! Jesse
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