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Unreachable

Intangible, the term your lips lightly exhale, just as the wind found its voice - Love being Unforgettable A hunger to interrupt any season numerous times you tried, only to fail If only you had been given the choice - to touch the Unreachable You would have been the one, my reason
_______________ ~ Just a little Scribble ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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May Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 3:33 PM
He was just out of reach an 'unforgettable love', Wonderful write Brandy, hugs
Nicole Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 7:52 AM
Dear Joseph, your thoughts hold so much truth. Sometimes the right one is in front of you, yet, they remain out of reach. You and your kind words are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy
Schneiter Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 8:14 AM
The beauty of this poem and the depth of its meaning are . . . unimpeachable. Hugs and Love, Paul
Nicole Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 1:41 PM
So kind are your thoughts. Thank you Paul, for stopping by to read this little scribble of mine. I appreciate you. :) Hugs and love, Brandy
Wolves Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 3:18 PM
Siiiigh... Enough said
Nicole Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 4:05 PM
Sometimes, less is more. I completely understand. :) Brandy
Lamoureux Avatar
July 24, 2019 at 7:34 AM
Who better to be, it is the role you are born to play.
Nicole Avatar
July 24, 2019 at 1:53 PM
This poem must tug at your heart for some reason. Thank you Rick. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy
Lamoureux Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 7:28 AM
I enjoyed this one again. To be able to scribble so beautifully, wow.
Nicole Avatar
July 22, 2019 at 7:01 PM
Thank you Rick!!! So kind of you to stop by and read these emotions from my heart. Again. Your thoughts are appreciated. I am just me. ~ Brandy
Pandit Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 4:54 PM
Congrats Brandy..so glad to see this poem climbing the best poem chart.
Nicole Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 9:31 PM
Thank you Vijay!! So kind of you to notice. I appreciate you and your support. :) Brandy
Lindley Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Truly a brilliantly composed scribble. With beauty in its depths of thought and emotion.. A fav..
Nicole Avatar
April 15, 2019 at 3:56 PM
Thank you Robert. You and your thoughts are appreciated. So kind of you to place this in your favorites. Thank you!! Many wonderful blessings to you my dear friend. ~ Brandy
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 14, 2019 at 10:54 PM
Well done
Nicole Avatar
April 14, 2019 at 11:28 PM
Thank you Allen. ~ Brandy
Warrior Avatar
April 14, 2019 at 7:36 PM
Lovely thoughts in such brief words, that capture the heart...happy thoughts dear friend...^WW^...{*J*}
Nicole Avatar
April 14, 2019 at 9:48 PM
Thank you Winged Warrior. My words are always from the heart. Your thoughts are always appreciated. My best to you. Keep smiling my dear friend. :) Brandy
Kriticos Avatar
April 13, 2019 at 4:19 PM
Such potent thoughts expressed so well. A very well written poem! I am wondering because my grammar is lacking if you could help me out as to why you capitalized Unforgettable and Unreachable in this context?
Nicole Avatar
April 13, 2019 at 7:16 PM
Thank you Kyle. I appreciate you reading this little scribble of mine. The words "Unforgettable and Unreachable" are Italicized to emphasize the main idea of the poem. ~ Brandy
Kriticos Avatar
April 13, 2019 at 4:17 PM
Such potent thoughts expressed so well. A very well written poem!
Nicole Avatar
April 13, 2019 at 7:08 PM
Thank you Kyle. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 5:00 PM
Very beautiful poem
Nicole Avatar
April 10, 2019 at 10:19 PM
Thank you Allen. Your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 6:16 PM
oops, I clicked wrong. I see i was in the wrong place. Now i want to go see your best poem (according to Soup)!!
Nicole Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 10:24 PM
I am truly humbled, with my words being placed so high. I am just me. Simply expressing emotions of the heart. ~ Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 6:15 PM
I was wanting to see what is considered your best poem, and Hey, this one comes up as your BEST poem. Let me try your second best now.
Nicole Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 10:18 PM
Dear Andrea, so kind of you to stop by and read this little scribble of mine. I am so happy that I can be here, and share my thoughts with so many wonderful poets. ~ Brandy
Lamoureux Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 4:28 PM
Thanks, I am always glad to receive blessings.
Nicole Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 10:10 PM
You are welcome. Blessings truly are everywhere. :) Brandy
Lamoureux Avatar
April 8, 2019 at 11:40 AM
This one tugs at the heart strings. Thanks for your visit this morning.
Nicole Avatar
April 8, 2019 at 1:32 PM
Thank you Richard. This was written from the heart. Many blessings to you. ~ Brandy
May Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 8:57 PM
The first 2 lines are awesome..Great write Brandy..
Nicole Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 9:51 PM
Thank you Joseph. The first thought is how it all began. Emotions within, are set free. I appreciate you and your kind words. ~ Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 2:57 PM
Evocative and beautiful lines, Brandy. Love it!
Nicole Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 7:35 PM
Thank you Andrea. There are many emotions tucked around these words. I appreciate you. ~ Brandy
Ifeanyichukwu Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 4:16 PM
Brandy the complications of life keeps us in continuous contention with choice and decision. Making the right decision and loving the trustworthy is an adventure, Well penned...
Nicole Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 5:27 PM
Well said Okonkwo. There is so much truth in your words. Life is filled with many choices, many moments. I appreciate you reading this little scribble of mine. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 8:07 AM
Love is always unforgettable, Brandy, as are the scribbles from your heart and your whispers in the wind, and the unreachable can always be touched in your dreams. All my best to you. John
Nicole Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 5:11 PM
Your thoughts hold so much truth. Of course, anything can happen in a dream. Thank you John for your kind words. I appreciate you. ~ Brandy
Pandit Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 7:16 AM
Another one of your excellent poems Brandy..touching ever so softly..evoking ever so meaningfully..not saying much to say a lot! A FAVE. FYI to all who visit my poetry: I will be away for one week starting 4/7.
Nicole Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 4:06 PM
Thank you Vijay. Your thoughts truly humble me. Saying so much, and it holding depth- meaning. I certainly strive to do, with my words. Thank you for letting me know you will be away. Be safe and have fun. ~ Brandy
Sharp Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 11:38 PM
Mystifying and atmospheric, beautifully crafted. Fave.
Nicole Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 1:40 PM
Thank you Lawrence. I appreciate you placing this little scribble in your favorites. ~ Brandy
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