Greg Gaul Poet Sonnet

Unraveling It All

I think of those legions who would suffer,
those people who have had lots less than me.
You think your life couldn't be tougher
until through their eyes, you finally see.

Squeeze out one tiny drop of compassion
to then see surely how far it could spread.
Actually not knowing in what fashion
it will brighten the dim lit road ahead.

We all sit so high, judging on our stools
prideful we know all about life, the game -
till thunderstruck wide awake by blind fools
to the truth that we all are made the same.

Unravel your ego, wipe your mind clear;
put to inner rest all your selfish fear.



110 words  sonnet  6/22/23

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Sam Kauffman June 22, 2023 at 2:56 PM "Squeeze out one tiny drop of compassion" - a line of true brilliance Greg. I knew when I saw your name on the new poems list that I was in for a powerful, poetic experience. NOT DISAPPOINTED! Your wisdom is expressed in the utter simplicity of eloquence. The sonnet is a perfect form for your thoughts. Thank you for this lesson in humility shown in your words. Blessings my friend! So wonderful to experience your gifted poet's soul again! Greg Gaul June 23, 2023 at 6:12 AM Sam, so nice to have your visit and insightful commentary. Namaste.

Paula Goldsmith June 22, 2023 at 10:29 AM A powerful write with a great ending. Have a fun day writing away................. Greg Gaul June 23, 2023 at 6:10 AM Paula, thanks for your read and cogent commentary.