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Unraveling

Grasping at straws
In hopes to cope
Collecting flaws
A heavy cloak

One by one
She picks apart
Goals, undone
Bleeding heart

A homely sight
She has become
Though options bright
She’s come undone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/26/2019 5:00:00 PM
I especially love the first stanza anna:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/26/2019 10:26:00 AM
Well penned, Anna.
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Date: 1/26/2019 9:56:00 AM
Anna, great write, those lines .. collecting flaws a heavy cloak... really spoke to me ~
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