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Unquiet Love

Serious trouble! Shooting barbs at each other While the moonlight shines overhead Once there was a "kind of love" But the illusion may have passed Shards of what was exist in the even g shadows If we can light up the flame again Then we came warm ourselves together But an uneasy feeling is growing Let us have peace Let us enjoy the time we have left Love is a gust of wind passing quickly A brief moment of relief From the difficulties of life

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2010 11:16:00 PM

Very nice one about fleeting relationships with a gentleness about it! Too bad if it has to be that way, don't you think? Relationships take a LOT of work. thanks for your comment today. Have a great Memorial Weekend. Luv, Andrea

Donna Golden

Date: 9/16/2009 7:56:00 PM

Matthew, you've captured the mystery and reality of relationships. Well done! Donna

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/16/2009 7:55:00 PM

nicely penned, sad though

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2009 4:32:00 PM

So true, Matthew, that "Love is a gust of wind passing quickly." We need to savor every moment of it and when the fire starts to dim, fan the flames to make love soar again. Lovely poem. Love is one of the few things that can provide a bit of relief from life's struggles. Awesome write! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/15/2009 4:34:00 PM

Shooting barbs at each other. Those hateful words are like that aren't they. Keep writing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/12/2009 4:31:00 AM

Love is a gust of wind passing quickly,what if time stood still,it never will..beautiful write Matthew--Charma