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Unpredictibility

Beautiful Trees, who cast cool shade Dangerous In wind_snow Unpredictable killers During storms, fire, ice Form: Shadorma

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Bl Devnath

Date: 8/26/2012 1:13:00 PM

Beautifully worded about unpredictibility contrasting with the nature. Loved always, bl

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

Date: 8/26/2012 9:37:00 AM

Your writes are always full of the beauty of nature and it's continuous changes.

Tim B

Date: 8/25/2012 9:32:00 AM

Trees, much like humans can hide in the shade, but in chaos, they may become dangerous. A masterful piece of poetry with great imagery Mrs. Sara. Thanks for sharing.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/25/2012 7:41:00 AM

so true! nicely said...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/25/2012 4:54:00 AM

Like it Sara - agree with Elizabeth - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/24/2012 8:52:00 PM

Yes, they could be dangerous in rare instances. Nice one, Sara.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/24/2012 6:26:00 PM

Powerful Sara, great imagery.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/24/2012 5:52:00 PM

Interesting. Light & Love

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/24/2012 5:46:00 PM

This sure does describe the nature of trees! Their beauty and danger and rolled up into one entity! You are liking this Shadorma style aren't you? It is a lot of fun, and challenging too! You have done wonderfully with this poem! Very dynamic of a write my friend! Great Work!!