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Unpredictibility

Beautiful
Trees, who cast cool shade
Dangerous
In wind_snow
Unpredictable killers
During storms, fire, ice  

Form: Shadorma

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Bl Devnath

August 26, 2012 at 1:13 PM

Beautifully worded about unpredictibility contrasting with the nature. Loved always, bl

Walayee Poet Lay Whitlock-Ishway

August 26, 2012 at 9:37 AM

Your writes are always full of the beauty of nature and it's continuous changes.

Tim B

August 25, 2012 at 9:32 AM

Trees, much like humans can hide in the shade, but in chaos, they may become dangerous. A masterful piece of poetry with great imagery Mrs. Sara. Thanks for sharing.

Ilene Bauer

August 25, 2012 at 7:41 AM

so true! nicely said...

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 25, 2012 at 4:54 AM

Like it Sara - agree with Elizabeth - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

August 24, 2012 at 8:52 PM

Yes, they could be dangerous in rare instances. Nice one, Sara.

Elizabeth Wesley

August 24, 2012 at 6:26 PM

Powerful Sara, great imagery.

Debbie Guzzi

August 24, 2012 at 5:52 PM

Interesting. Light & Love

Russell Sivey

August 24, 2012 at 5:46 PM

This sure does describe the nature of trees! Their beauty and danger and rolled up into one entity! You are liking this Shadorma style aren't you? It is a lot of fun, and challenging too! You have done wonderfully with this poem! Very dynamic of a write my friend! Great Work!!

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