Unplayed

Sunbathing on a ship in the Med
seventy-two, I heard you, Harry;
you did not drift into my young head
but speared with sword, I could not parry.

There it has stayed, never left my soul
“can’t live if living is without you”
words, one day, I’ll play them to console;
girls let you down, mother said they do.

Yet, still now, the song remains unplayed
all that life has taken, and bestows
we have love that never seems to fade;
“Guess that’s just the way the story goes.”



Without You - Harry Nilsson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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May Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 10:37 AM
Very nicely penned Terry, Congrats on your win
Miller Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 1:19 AM
Thank you Joseph
Dietrich Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 12:07 PM
Wow. Is this for the contest of a poem based on a song. Love the song and singer. Love your poem!
Miller Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 1:20 AM
Thank you Andrea
Crandall Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 11:57 AM
Great tribute to a great song. Guess that's just the way the story goes - indeed!
Miller Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 1:20 AM
Thank you David
Jones Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 6:47 AM
This was cleaver and emotive! Thanks for sharing.
Miller Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 1:20 AM
Thank you Karen
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:27 PM
your words reminded me of that beautiful song from many years. Your poem captured it beautifully.
Miller Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 2:07 AM
Thank you so much Sara
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